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Shaheer Hussain
Shaheer Hussain
The Educator
One More Try
Published On May 2nd 2012
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Scotland people found a new king named Robert the Bruce. He was a brave and wise king. The English army was very big and Scotland army was very short in quantity. But Robert the Bruce didn’t give up. but the English army wining and Robert the Bruce escaped into a cave after 7 day he saw a spider she was making her net she climbs up and the net broke and fell down again she climbed up an net broke and she fell down Robert the Bruce was seeing the spider interestingly. Then spider makes her net. Robert the Bruce thinks that I am a human how do I give up the little spider didn’t give up so how do I the little spider try 6 and makes her net in 7 try and I too try 6 times and then he go to Scotland and collect people and war with English army and he success to free Scotland people. The story end and we get a lesson that keep tying and trying you will reach your target.
 
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Comments 10
Ashra Are you want to make my friend my cusson also name is shaheer Ashra
Mar 11th 2014
 
 
Ashra You are best writter Ashra
Mar 11th 2014
 
 
Anam Copied copied copied and i have read it in the same books as emaan Anam
Nov 19th 2013
 
 
Emaan I've read this in grade 2,in my reader Oxford Progressive English and in Oxford Reading Circle 4. They were some thick books alright!!! No wonder I fainted in grade 2 while carrying mybag Emaan
Sep 12th 2012
 
 
zainab You just coppied it from the book oxford reading circle 4 and its not even complete Zainab
Aug 2nd 2012
 
 
momina Nice Momina
Jun 1st 2012
 
 
Undesirable No. 1 How did the admin approve this? Undesirable No. 1
May 22nd 2012
 
 
Ahmed Gud written but very common Ahmed
May 22nd 2012
 
 
Wajeeha Nice! Wajeeha
May 11th 2012
 
 
saadia It is very good Saadia
May 4th 2012
 
 

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