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Ayan Rehman
Ayan Rehman
Beconhouse School System Middle Branch
The Assassin And The Sea Of Salgazar
Published On Apr 5th 2012
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Many many years ago there was a land called Fortropia. It had many powerful secrets in it so every other kingdom wanted to conquer it but they failed. Then the price of this land wanted to capture the most powerful weapon of the land the dark opal. They said whoever will capture it will be overwhelmed with dark power but it was lost from the world but the price whose name was Saphirex was willing to get it so he began his search and when he found it he was cursed with dark power, he then wanted to rule the land so he killed his father and so he became the ruler of Fortropia. He then saw a threat coming to him. his son was the source of light and he was the seeker of the opals of light which were the only things that could stop Saphirex because Saphirex had mastered the power of the dark opal and could do many things such as create powerful dark creatures, cast dark spells and curses, posses super strength, shape shift and could spread darkness around the world and so he spread darkness across the land and he disposed of his wife and banished his son he created a dark wizard servant out of his own shadow. Our story begins when near the sea of Salgazar the king’s knights were on the lookout for any thieves for stealing the goods one just saw a strange shadow but he decides it was nothing he shouted at the others "O! all clear here mate" the others nodded and they were on their way to their huts when suddenly out of the shadows came an assassin wearing white clothes and a hood he jumped on a knight and pierced his sword in the knights heart then he took out a curved dagger and approached from the shadows onto another man he cut his neck with the dagger and drove his body in the shadows. He then whistled softly and five more assassins appeared one with twin swords, one with a clawed metal glove, one with a bow and many arrows, one with round shields and one with metal fists. The twin sword-one leapt of his feet and into the air he was coming on a knight he lifted his swords and slashed the knights back the knight gave a silent shriek and he was knocked out cold the shielded one threw both of his shields at one knight and they both hit the man’s back he too was out cold and then they all charged the knights the clawed one slashed the man’s chest the arrowed one fired explosive arrows at the knights and there were thunderous explosions and they all were knocked out cold. There leader Altair signalled them at the wall they all nodded and fired string blisters at the wall and swung to get on it Altair jumped up into the dawning sky and onto the wall then he said "OK men now that we have this port under control we will have to separate three of us will keep a lookout for the assassin signal if they find it they will sent reinforcements the other two will come with me are we clear..then let’s go may Allah protect us" after these words he called "night hawk, shadow come with me the twin sword-one and the metal fist one stepped out the others nodded and jumped back down while the other trio jumped into the sea and were swimming onto the boats. What awaits them on their journey we will find out in the second part of the assassin and the sea of Salgazar. COMING DAY AFTER TOMORROW.


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Ayan I HAVE SENT THE SECOND PART TO THE ADMINISTRATOR BUT HE HAS NOT YET APPROVED SO I THOUGHT ITS BETTER TO GIVE YOU A BLOCKBUSTER OF THE SECOND STORY'S LAYOUT READ IT ABOVE Ayan
Apr 13th 2012
 
 

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