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Emaan  Farhan
Emaan Farhan
Westminster School And College
The Unexpected Visitor
Published On Apr 1st 2012
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Ashley and Alison were peacefully colouring in their colouring books. They were twin sisters and loved each other very much. Unlike many twins, they didn't fight and this made their mother happy. Alison had borrowed some of Ashley's crayons and just as she picked up the red one, she heard a tap on the window. Ashley, who was too busy colouring her fantastic picture, didn't hear the tap. Alison opened the window, but no one was there! She thought it was her imagination and went back to her colouring. The next day, Alison was sitting alone in her room, reading a book – Alice's Adventures in Wonderland. Ashley came in and began jumping on the bed, where Alison was reading. Alison politely asked her sister to get off and Ashley got off. Ashley started jumping on the trampoline when she heard a tap on the window and glanced at it, but nothing was there. She got off the trampoline and opened the window. There, she saw a black and red feather, like a bird's. Ashley rubbed her eyes, and the feather was gone!" Hmmpphh. Probably my imagination playing tricks on me "she said to herself and started to jump again. Tomorrow they both heard the tapping noise, but not on the window, but on the door."Ashley! Alison! Lunch!" Alison and Ashley looked at each other and gave a sigh of relief as their mom came in. After the lunch, they heard the tap on the window. Alison opened the window and before her eyes was a large bird with gleaming yellow, golden, red and black feathers."I am the Phoenix............."
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Comments 15
Emaan Please read all the coments to know why there is no more of this story! Emaan
Aug 9th 2012
 
 
zainab But what is the reason you are not publishing the next part Zainab
Aug 8th 2012
 
 
Fatima Waiting for the next part......................... Fatima
Jul 31st 2012
 
 
Emaan :D Sorry every1 Emaan
Jul 31st 2012
 
 
zainab Why are you not writing its next part Zainab
Jul 30th 2012
 
 
Sidra Well its okk but do write the next part for "believe in you self' as it is going gr88! Sidra
Jul 28th 2012
 
 
Emaan Sorry Everyone! No more of this story! Please check my other stories: Believe in yourself,Sandra Sue,The frustrated baker and many more. Please don't take this matter seriously since I don't have that much time to write the next part as well as the 4th part of Believe in yourself. Thank you for your cooperation! Emaan
Jul 25th 2012
 
 
rohma Very nice! you build a great job:D Rohma
Apr 28th 2012
 
 
Itachi Nyc! plz wriye the nxt part as soon as possible. Itachi
Apr 19th 2012
 
 
Emaan Well,I will write the next part when i get time :) :P Emaan
Apr 13th 2012
 
 
fatima Oh my god!! please write the next part quickly i am curious!!i want to know what has happened!! nice story!till now! Fatima
Apr 8th 2012
 
 
faisal Nyssssssss Faisal
Apr 7th 2012
 
 
Emaan Thank you kanwal Emaan
Apr 5th 2012
 
 
Ali Publis the next quickly please Ali
Apr 5th 2012
 
 
kanwal Wow! That was a very nice story. You used a nice range of vocabulary, but your building up of suspence was the best. Keep it up! Kanwal
Apr 4th 2012
 
 

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