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Namra Shahid
Namra Shahid
Government College For Women Model Town,lahore
We Were About To Leave Picnic The House For Then
Published On Sep 2nd 2010
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We were about to leave the house for picnic just then we found a little blue packet in our garage. My cousin held the packet. He opened it, and inside we saw a lot of little round yellow thing. "Sweet"! Said my cousin”. But we ought to try and find out who they belong to before we eat them" said my cousin. I told them that "finding's not keeping". My cousin did not listen to me. They ate all the sweets and after sometime they felt giddy and fell down on floor. I was shocked to see this scene and quickly ran towards the door. I called my mother and told her whole story. We went to hospital. Doctor checked my cousins. After sometime he told that these children ate something which was poisoned then i told the doctor that they ate some sweets and after that they felt dizzy. Two of my cousins were not very serious because they had been sensible enough to spit out her sweets and they went home that afternoon but my three cousins were still in hospital and were feeling very ill and miserable. They said me that
"If only we'd believed you when you said finding's not keeping'! We’ll never do such a thing again! It was wrong as well as foolish. We wish somebody would write all this down so that other children would know what happened to us, and be warned". We thought we'd better do it just in case there are still a few children who think that finding is keeping and they can eat anything they find.

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Comments 14
Tooba Gr8 Tooba
May 3rd 2014
Arooba WELCOME DEAR Arooba
Apr 18th 2014
Arooba WELCOME DEAR Arooba
Apr 18th 2014
raveeha This is from 1 of enid blyton's books Raveeha
Apr 12th 2014
Irum Well do I look like I'm lying?? Its obviously copied!!!! Irum
Oct 30th 2013
Namra I didn't copied.I wrote myself in story writing competition Namra
Oct 11th 2013
Irum This story is copied from enid blytons book. you know, I really HATE it when guys or girls cheat stories and say that they wrote it on their own...... Irum
Oct 6th 2013
Namra Thanks arooba Namra
Aug 17th 2013
Arooba Excellent Arooba
Aug 7th 2013
Namra Thanks! Namra
Aug 8th 2011
Itachi Nyc !! but i read this story but more in details in a book Itachi
Aug 7th 2011
Aamna I like your story Aamna
Dec 26th 2010
Ibrahim Good but is it a real story. Ibrahim
Oct 28th 2010
Aiman Hmmmm nyc........ Aiman
Oct 14th 2010

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