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Abeera Tariq
Abeera Tariq
Beaconhouse School System
Winter
Published On Feb 17th 2012
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The scorching heat fled away,
Calling the winters this way.
Welcome the warm things,
Let’s get dry fruits or a hot drink.
Stay inside a blanket or in front of a heater,
Enjoy the cool nice winters!
 
 
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Comments 6
Abeera Thank you all for ur comments..:) Ayman i really appreciate your view.. and Just to correct you i think u should have written THEN not THAN in ur comment... Abeera
Apr 17th 2012
 
 
fatima Goooooddsssss!!! Fatima
Mar 14th 2012
 
 
Ayman Good :) In the second line and the last one it will be 'Winter' not Winters. When you have written something new keep it away for a day and don't touch or read it. Than after a day read it aloud to yourself. It will help you in correcting mistakes you might have made. Ayman
Feb 29th 2012
 
 
Bareera Gudeee Bareera
Feb 25th 2012
 
 
Abeera Thanks LAIBA.. Yay this time I did not make the mistake of typing your name incorrectly... Abeera
Feb 22nd 2012
 
 
Laiba Gud... Laiba
Feb 19th 2012
 
 

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