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Aiman Akhtar
Aiman Akhtar
My Mother
Published On Feb 14th 2012
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On one Thursday afternoon I returned from school in a very bad mood. The day's events' had totally worn me out and put me in a bad mood. When I reached my place I raced to my room, on the way my mum greeted me but I ignored. At that moment I didn't even realize what I had done .First, I had not greeted my mum back which was by replying to her salam and secondly I had shown an unacceptable behaviour towards her which was unbearable. Unfortunately, for me I didn't even care. As soon as I got to my room I jumped in my bed with a sleepy head and as my head touched the pillow; my body grew familiar with the solid but soft body beneath it I drifted off to sleep. I don't know how long I lay on that bed totally unaware of what was happening around me. Suddenly, a high voice came to my ears, calling me. I stood up from my bed in a lazy motion and forced my body to face what was ahead of me. Surprisingly, I felt quite weak moreover badly in need of something good to eat or drink. When I went downstairs, my maid told me that it was my teacher (the person who came to taught me the holy Quran) . I was on my way to greet her but then my mother caught my in the way and I guess she came to know that I wasn't feeling well. She told me to come to the table and at the spot took out three oranges, and made me an orange juice. I still remember the time she finished that job in. It was three minutes. For me taking out an orange juice in just three minutes seemed so hard. After I drank it , I felt so full of life and at that moment I realized that if my mom wouldn't have been there what would I have had done . Went and studied with an empty stomach. She really did make my day. I felt so awesome that I rushed to her and gave her a tight hug. She gave me that heart warming smile which made me realize how important she was to me and to this day I can say that my mum is my superstar and my world.
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Comments 14
Anam Nice story very very nice by the way momina iv also been to england,ireland,scotland,belgium,wales and switzerland.cani be ur friend???? Anam
Nov 9th 2013
Amna Nice,love it...........Keep it up:::))) Amna
Dec 19th 2012
HAMNA Nice...I like it Hamna
Oct 23rd 2012
Emaan Oh mom,think if we ain't been havin' yer around fer our entertainment :) hahahaha I simply love Ye Old English.:)) Emaan
Jun 12th 2012
Emaan Nice!By the way, Aiman,What's in your picture?? Emaan
May 21st 2012
Saba Very guddddddddddddd !!!!!!!!!gr8 effort Saba
Feb 28th 2012
Aiman @Afnan : At the time I was writing this story , I was in a hurry so I didn't really care about my grammatical mistakes , I just kept on writing Aiman
Feb 27th 2012
AFNAN The story is gud and i guess there r some gramatical mistakes too........U can improve it!Keep writing stories! Afnan
Feb 24th 2012
Aiman Thank you everybody for taking your precious time to read my story :) means a lot Aiman
Feb 22nd 2012
Aimen Nice story Aimen
Feb 22nd 2012
Laiba GuD!!! Laiba
Feb 19th 2012
Fatima Abdul A nice story Fatima Abdul
Feb 17th 2012
Momina I agree with Zuhaa.Good I like it too! ps, cute pic Zuhaa, i think that its a Hermione Granger doll. Am i correct? Momina
Feb 17th 2012
Zuhaa Good I like it Zuhaa
Feb 15th 2012

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