Once there was a girl named Hina who was the daughter of a maid .The maid was very poor and she earn money by working at the Landlord lady house. Maid’s daughter Hina was also with her. While when Hina was dusting in the house of rich people she saw a pink and beautiful dollhouse. It was actually the dollhouse of the daughter of Landlord lady named Fatima. Fatima was a little rude. Hina was amazed to see the Fatima’s doll housesit looked eye catching to her. She wanted to have her own dollhouse like that. She always liked to dust the small chairs, tables, beds, and other accessories of the dollhouse. After dusting the dollhouse she said to Fatima that your dollhouse is very pretty Fatima replied yeah yeah whatever you cant have this you are the daughter of a maid and you are poor now don’t dare to touch my dolly house get lost. Now Hina’s heart was broken when she and his mom [maid] were sleeping in the quarter Hina asked her mother with love that i also wanted to have the doll house but her mother said with anger and shouted that do you know it is expensive and i can’t afford it now Hina was sad in her dream she always saw that she had her dollhouse and then because of this she was mentally disturbed and was ill for 2 weeks. Her mother was worried and when she told to the landlady as she was kind she took Hina to the doctor. The doctor told that she is ill because of any depuration. Her mother understands that her daughter was ill because of dollhouse. She told that to the landlady then the landlady said that why had you never told me about that I’ll give her the dollhouse as a present she went to the toy shop and bought it and gave to Hina. Hina opened her eyes she was very happy. Fatima felt sorry for her of being rude to her. Now Hina was recovered very soon and was all right again. Laughing
Thanks all.I cant stop laughing when I read this story (the reason is the grammatical mistakes) coz I was like in grade 4 or 5 when I came up with an idea of a writing a story on Vshine. After writing it I was in such a hurry that I never bothered to check my story or correct the grammatical mistakes and then I clicked SUBMIT but I cant believe that actually I won :p
Soooooooo many mistake but the idea and the story is extremely nice!don't get hurt if any body don't like it I like it.try your best next time very nice idea.(i am very sorry if i hurt you but i did not mean to hurt you).