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Affan Faisal
Affan Faisal
Leduc Junior High
The Perfect Fit
Published On Mar 23rd 2012
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Cory the crab was very excited because it was finally time to look for a shell. “Hey Wally, do you want to help me look for a new shell today?” he asked his friend. “Sure, why not?” answered Wally the whale. Shortly after their search began, Cory found a shiny red shell. He put it on his back, but soon discovered that the shell was very itchy. “This just won't do it!” explained Cory. Next, the two friends found a blue and yellow shell. : This could be perfect. “Said Cory. But once he had the shell on, he realized that it was much too heavy. “This just won't do either!” said Cory in frustration. “Don't give up, “said Wally. “You'll find the perfect shell soon enough. “Just then, Cory spotted a shiny pink and blue striped shell. “I think this is it! “He explained as he swam over to it. As soon he jumped in the shell he realized that it was too much big. “Help! I can't see anything, “said Cory. “This shell won't do either!” and hidden crab tumbled out. Cory was very frustrated. “I give up!” He cried. Just then Wally spotted something off in the distance. “Hey have you tried that green shell over there? “He asked. Cory wasn't sure, but decided to try the shell anyway. When Cory slipped it on, he realized it was the perfect fit. “Now you know. “began Wally, “ that if you don't give up, you always find what you're looking for! “ Cory clicked his claws happily in agreement.

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Comments 12
Affan Ahmed actually i am in grade 5 Affan
Sep 23rd 2013
 
 
Irum Ok Irum
Sep 10th 2013
 
 
Affan My grade is worng i havent changed it for a while i am in grade 5 Affan
Sep 8th 2013
 
 
Irum I KNOW! HW CAN A 3RD GRADER WRITE STORIS LIKE THIS? AND PUNCTUATION IS CORRECT TOO? I THINK ITS CHEATED! Irum
Feb 27th 2013
 
 
shayan Nyc story Shayan
Nov 7th 2012
 
 
Muhammad Hassam GOOD MAN Muhammad Hassam
Aug 14th 2012
 
 
Emaan Nyc and cool Emaan
Apr 3rd 2012
 
 
ayesha Its nice ur writin stories tht mature at ur age...;) Ayesha
Apr 2nd 2012
 
 
syeda tahira Wooooooooooooooow did u really write it Syeda Tahira
Mar 26th 2012
 
 
Aliza Nyc if original Aliza
Mar 25th 2012
 
 
Aimen Awesome keepit up Aimen
Mar 25th 2012
 
 
Ahmed Wow how a 3 grader can write such nyc stories at this age. awsum Ahmed
Mar 23rd 2012
 
 

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