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Affan Faisal
Affan Faisal
Leduc Junior High
Magic Night
Published On Feb 3rd 2012
Total Comments : 10
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9 People Like this!


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Hurricane the cat comes in with a great gust of wind. Sometimes flies past his ear. Is it moth? Hurricane sniffs, but he does not know this smell. Something strange has gotten in the house and things are beginning to change. Hurricane does not change! The strangeness his ears itch and hid fur on end. Hurricane must protect his family, from this fluttery, skittery thing. He pounces. He has it between his paws. It is soft! He touches it with his tongue. It is sweet! It is for cats! Is it for eating? No! This strange thing is a strong thing! Hurricane could make his people wake and look, but would they see? This house is a where everything has its place and every place has its thing. There is no place for this strange thing. What does it want here? What does it bring? He wonders. It comes to the baby. It stares and stares. The Hurricane sees-and understands! This strange thing is a young thing. This strange thing is a lost thing. Hurricane pushes the window open to let it fly out. It flits across the road to the shore to where a ship waits. I found the strangest place, it tells his mama, who laughs. Hurricane watches them sail away and hopes the strange thing will return some magic night.
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Comments 10
Affan Yes I am Affan
Nov 8th 2014
Shaheer Hey u fan of CID me tooooo Shaheer
Aug 18th 2014
Irum I think i' ve read this story sommewhere, kid!! Better not cheat, kid!! Irum
Feb 27th 2013
Momina So thats what the magic 'thingumabobies' were Momina
Feb 21st 2012
fatima Great imaginative story.i like the stories like this one.nicey nicey guddy guddy nice. Fatima
Feb 14th 2012
Affan People, Mermaids, and Fairies.... Affan
Feb 12th 2012
Momina What was the strange thing? cool story! Momina
Feb 11th 2012
Wajeeha Fantastic! Wajeeha
Feb 9th 2012
Ahmed Wow good imagination Ahmed
Feb 9th 2012
Aimen Well done Aimen
Feb 4th 2012

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