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Ali Abdullah
Ali Abdullah
Aps Faisal
Planet Of Spikes
Published On Jan 29th 2012
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Once upon a time a boy named Ali Abdullah was sleeping. Suddenly he heard a noise from outside. He went out and saw some light on sky. He used his telescope to saw what that lightning thing was. He spotted the thing to his surprise it was a space ship containing two aliens. Ali tools his glider and start gliding. He managed to reach spaceship. Aliens were not horrible and evil. They let Ali come in. Aliens took him to the Planet of Spikes. This planet was full of spikes. Aliens use special kind of shoes so they stay safe from spikes. Suddenly some arrows, bombs, bullets and cannon ball fell on planet. These weapons were used by dragons of another planet called Dragonlit. They were here for a war. They want to rule the Planet of Spikes. Dragon attacked Ali with their fire but Ali ran into a big house. Suddenly he felt pain in his head and he fell down. In his dream he saw a very big alien covered with spikes. He asked Ali what you want. Ali answered that I want many weapons from planet Earth. Suddenly Ali woke up and he saw many weapons in front of him... He gave all of them to good aliens. At first good aliens were losing but now they were winning. Dragons ran back to planet Dragonlit. Ali used good Aliens space ship to return to planet Earth. Now Ali was a great hero of Planet of the Spikes.

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Momina Nice Momina
Feb 3rd 2012
fatima Good story,nice story,`````````` very good story,very nice story!`````` Fatima
Feb 2nd 2012
Aamna Good story Aamna
Jan 31st 2012

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