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Ali Akbar
Ali Akbar
Sls Montessori And School
Monster And A Boy
Published On Jan 29th 2012
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Once upon a time there was a land called giant greenery. People said that the land is destroyed by monsters and a brave warrior can stop him the people were saying that a brave boy can stop them also.
There was a boy called Ali everyone in his school said that you are not brave you are just a little boy but he never stopped and decided to go to the giant greenery to safe the people. He travelled and travelled time went by he saw an old man and he asked him that where the castle of monsters is? The old man said, “go to the right way’.
He went along and saw a tall castle there was no security so he went in. He saw a room he went in and saw that there were so many nuts and bullets. He started eating the nuts. Time went by and he felt asleep. He was sleeping and he heard the voice of monsters. he stood up and said in a deep voice. ‘Who’s there? The monster enters in the room and said what you can do so that we can free the people. he said I can eat a bullet. The monsters said prove it. Without picking up a bullet he picked up a nut and ate it. He said can you do this. The monsters picked up a bullet and tried to eat it but they couldn’t and their sharp these fall down. The monsters said that you can take the people.
 
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Comments 6
Momina Can i correct you? you should say: sorry i have made some mistakes. good story anyway. good pic. imrove vocab Momina
Feb 3rd 2012
 
 
ali Nobody likes my picture ******** Ali
Feb 3rd 2012
 
 
fatima I go with amna but your imaginations are good! Fatima
Feb 2nd 2012
 
 
Zuhaa Mice ops nice Zuhaa
Feb 2nd 2012
 
 
Aamna Good but some mistakes. You should improve your english Aamna
Jan 31st 2012
 
 
ali Sorry but i have did some mistakes Ali
Jan 30th 2012
 
 

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