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Hamza Naseer
Hamza Naseer
Pises,riyadh,saudi Arabia
Jack's New Family
Published On Jan 29th 2012
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Once upon a time there was a boy named Jack. His father was a rich army officer. One day his father was suddenly called by the army for a fight. Many days passed bit he didn't heard from my father. One day a phone came. He asked who it was. He told he was an army officer. He asked him about my father but he told me that he died in the fight. I was shocked I put the phone and went into my room. He phoned his uncle to tell him this news. Quickly, he came to Jack's house. He supported Jack. Then he started living with Jack.
He was a wicked man. One day he took Jack out and threw him out into the sea. He couldn't swim so he became unconscious. After a while when he came into sense, He saw a house. He went in. It was quiet. Then when he went forward, He heard some people talking. He went into the room and saw some ghosts. He screamed loudly. Then one ghost came and asked him to be friends. He became his friend. He invited Jack to a party. Jack accepted. They went in there were three other ghosts. They were all playing and laughing.
Their names were John, Amy and Ferdinand. John became his father. Amy became his mother and Ferdinand became his brother. Then on the second day he became a ghost too. They told him that this was a magical house and it disappears for 100 years! Then on the fourth day they went to Jack's Uncle House. And Jack killed him by himself. Then they went to their own house and lived happily thereafter. FOREVER!
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Comments 7
Khadijah Stupid story but good imagination :) Khadijah
Aug 16th 2012
 
 
Izza A.O.A! Hamza....keep rocking...superb...gr8!!!~~~~~~~~~~~~ x..1..1!! Izza
Feb 5th 2012
 
 
Momina I wish the uncle was nice. my uncles are very nice. awsome story. (told you reading stories make me in a good mood!) Momina
Feb 3rd 2012
 
 
Wajeeha Even I study in PISES in riyadh btw aswm story Wajeeha
Feb 2nd 2012
 
 
fatima Very very very very intresting! Fatima
Feb 2nd 2012
 
 
Zuhaa Stupid uncle huh! Zuhaa
Feb 2nd 2012
 
 
Aamna Small but good Aamna
Jan 31st 2012
 
 

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