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Maria Noor
Maria Noor
Forward Public School,hayatabad,peshawar
Time Reverse
Published On Jan 31st 2012
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Once upon a time, there was a girl named Maryam who lived close to a forest. One day Maryam went for a walk in the forest. She had been to this forest before with her family when she was a little girl therefore she wasn’t paying much attention to the path she was following and lost track of the path. She ran here and there but she couldn’t find her way. She was sure that she was in the deep forest and it was getting dark. She was tired and hungry, so she slept under a tree. When she woke up in the morning she really missed her family but there was nothing she could do to find her way back home? As she was walking in the forest she saw a strange object on the ground. She picked it and held it close to her eyes for a better look. There was a button and something was written on it but it was illegible. She thought that she should press the button but she did not know what was going to happen. Still she pressed it and suddenly everything changed and she was with her family and they were in the forest too. But when she talked to them, they didn’t replay. She did not understand. But when she tried to read the words harder on the strange object, it said “REVERSE OF THE TIME.”
She wanted to go home with them but they already had the younger Maryam with them so she could not go. Suddenly she had an idea. She went to her parents’ picnic bag and took out a spare map that they brought.  She was hungry since yesterday so she also took some food.
Then she adjusted the time reverse object again to the time when she was getting out of her house for the walk. There was the other Maryam. Panicking, she ran to herself and cried, “Maryam Maryam! Stop!” But she couldn’t get a replay from herself because it was the time reverse. She had another idea. She ran inside her home and took a mirror from her room. By the time she was back, the other Maryam was already in the forest and the real Maryam had to find her before the other Maryam found the strange object in the forest or it will make the real Maryam also a part of the reverse of time. But the hard part was how was she going to find the other Maryam in the forest?  Well, this is when she was going to use the map that she had gotten from the picnic bag. She took her mirror out and she put it on the ground and threw the time reverse machine at it as hard as she could and it reflected her and the world went upside down. The other Maryam and the real Maryam became one and then she was the real Maryam and everything was back to normal.
Distantly she heard someone call her name. When she got a bit more conscience someone was shouting “Wake up Maryam”.  Ah! It was all a dream.
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Comments 9
Aimen Excellent and awesome Aimen
Feb 22nd 2012
Maria Walikum assalam ! thanks izza for liking my story. Maria
Feb 6th 2012
Izza A.O.A! dude! a time reverser......!! dat wud be gr8...!!! ywr..gr8 thinking..u scholar! Izza
Feb 5th 2012
Maria Thank u Amna, Zuhaa, Tasbiha, Wajeeha, Momina.and Tasbiha i also wish i had a time reverser :) Maria
Feb 3rd 2012
Momina Gr8 story Momina
Feb 3rd 2012
Wajeeha Great story Wajeeha
Feb 2nd 2012
fatima I wish i had a time revers er too.but very nice story Fatima
Feb 2nd 2012
Zuhaa Gr8 thoughts well done Zuhaa
Feb 2nd 2012
Aamna Good story Aamna
Jan 31st 2012

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