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Ali Akbar
Ali Akbar
Never Give Up
Published On Jan 18th 2012
Total Comments : 21
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Rank 6 Out of 10

Once there was a boy called Ali. His behaviour was so bad that he got 10th or 11th position and he was so naughty. He never do his was in time he is really a bad boy. If he improves his behaviour he could get first position but he always just look at his book and say to his mother that I have completed his work. You should never give up.                                                                     

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Comments 21
Fatima Aimen Are u crazy?Ek story comments me salena gomez ka kya kaam he.If you want to chat with your friends just use facebook or other sites. "STUPID" Fatima
Jun 3rd 2014
Fatima Guys!! see that he studies in class 3rd and I think we should encourage him for writing more stories. "BECAUSE WE LEARN FROM OUR MISTAKES" Ali well done and best of luck. Keep writing more stories. Fatima
Jun 3rd 2014
Anam Guys we should say to his story senseless we should help him to improve what if somebody says this to you? Anam
Sep 21st 2013
May 1st 2013
sidra Nothing to comment cuz ur not worth it but try to make ur selve dont mind !! Sidra
Sep 3rd 2012
sidra HmmmMMMM ........................... NOTHING TO COMMENT :P Sidra
Sep 2nd 2012
@@F!y@ I agree wid tasbiha n abdur rafay @@f!y@
Jun 8th 2012
Abdur Rafay R u crazy???!! U have written such a short,senseless story & the moral has given u just 3 stars(i.e 6/10). U really need to work hard to write long, interesting stories & should"never give up." Abdur Rafay
Jun 7th 2012
Undesirable No. 1 What's going on he maybe have written it just for fun! but u people should not judge it like that!!!!!!!!don't judge it's not the teaching of our religion....u can tell him to correct it !!! Undesirable No. 1
Feb 25th 2012
Aimen I love selena gomez Aimen
Feb 22nd 2012
rabii Ye stupid selena gomez... juxt hate her.... Rabii
Jan 29th 2012
Fatima Abdul You have made many mistakes in your story try agine Fatima Abdul
Jan 28th 2012
Momina Awesome story. makes awesome sense. i agree with Tashbiha Momina
Jan 27th 2012
Syed Maaz What the heck is that man?? Your story should have made any sense but to me, you just wrote random words and said; "Never give up"...what kind of story is this:( Syed Maaz
Jan 26th 2012
Jan 26th 2012
ali My name is also ali.There are mistakes in it improve it. Ali
Jan 26th 2012
Aamna Very bad story what have you written it does not make any sense. Aamna
Jan 23rd 2012
meno There are many mistakes in that story!!! He never do his was in !!!! Meno
Jan 23rd 2012
Mohammad Try try again Mohammad
Jan 20th 2012
Aliza Ur stories r tooooooo shrt Aliza
Jan 20th 2012
fatima there are many mistakes try to improve and NEVER GIVE UP! Fatima
Jan 19th 2012

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