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Hamza Danial
Hamza Danial
My Monstrous Younger Brother
Published On Jan 18th 2012
Total Comments : 19
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Rank 9 Out of 10
"I want a younger brother mom" one night I demanded. "You will get one if you deserve one". Mom replied. "What makes you think I don't deserve a younger brother?" I asked. Mom replied, "I did not say that. I meant you will get one if you can handle him". "Handling a brother is easy". I still insisted. "Ok we will discuss it tomorrow." My mother gave me a good night kiss and I went in a deep sleep. I heard my mom saying, "Meet your baby brother". Trust me I couldn't feel more thankful. The baby looked like an angel from the outside but when I reached to him to pat him on the cheek he bit my finger and did not stop. Hold him for a while. Will you?  I will bring milk for him" Mom said handing me the baby. When I took him in my lap he started to pinch me and when I got angry, he responded with a giggle. After a while my mother came with a feeder and gave it to me to feed the baby. As soon as I placed the feeder in his mouth, the baby sprinkled it all over my face. When my mother saw the milk on my face she blamed me that I drank all the milk because some milk went in my mouth and in my nose too.  All I could do was to stare at the baby because my mother was in front of me and the baby responded with a giggle again. Now I got really angry and threw the baby out of my lap and just then I woke up I was relieved to find that it was just a dream.  I thanked god that I do not have such a monstrous baby brother.
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Comments 19
Emaan Younger brothers are gifts from God! How can you POSSIBLY hate a sibling? And it is a blessing for you to take care of little siblings since little bro's and sis's think big siblings are their role models and they learn alot from elder siblings. I am blessed by Allah that I have a challenged brother as my sibling. But I give this story 5 outta 10. Why you ask? because I love my family and this story kinda tells you do not like siblings and I like siblings so from my eyes I give it 6. But still, um, it's good. Emaan
Aug 24th 2012
Khadijah My sister does these things but i don't get angry because I just copy what she does and we start laughing. Khadijah
Aug 17th 2012
Imtiaz Kids look differently at babies than grown ups. You have innocently described a baby would do. You dont have to be mature at this age. Good, I liked Imtiaz
Mar 7th 2012
Arshia Bring in new and mature ideas.... innovative.... Arshia
Jan 29th 2012
Taimoor This story is not good, its cheated and should not be given the prize. Taimoor
Jan 28th 2012
Aamna Syed Aliza is saying right that your story is not so good. I think you can improve your English to right a better story and i think you should not be given the prize Aamna
Jan 27th 2012
Anas The story below "You Always Need Your Mother" has a same type of way (the dream), but that story also gives a nice message and that story got 7 out of 10. But this story doesn't contai ANY good lesson, so how on earth did u give him 9 out of 10?? "Hamza Danial"sorry..., this is not directed to you, but the administrator.. Anas
Jan 26th 2012
Jan 26th 2012
Momina Tasbiha, im so with you Momina
Jan 26th 2012
Zuhaa I don't like the end part because even if brother's are small or big they can give great help Zuhaa
Jan 24th 2012
Aamna Why vshine have given this story 10 out of 9 marks it should be given 6 marks. I do not like this story and i think Hamza you can improve. Aamna
Jan 23rd 2012
fasih This story is boring, you will improve Fasih
Jan 23rd 2012
Urooj Hahahahahaha...........but little br0 r the gifts 0f god.........your writing style ids time write about "ur angel little brother".......:-p Urooj
Jan 23rd 2012
areeba A bit negative. Areeba
Jan 21st 2012
fasih This story is not good, it should not be given 9 out of 10. Fasih
Jan 21st 2012
Aliza Not so gud Aliza
Jan 20th 2012
fatima I go with both of you but this is a nice story don't give negative remarks.and hamza try to write more better story.(i am not saying that it is not a good story). Fatima
Jan 20th 2012
Syed Maaz How did u get 9 out of 10 for this kind of story..??:s IT's good..but i don't think that it deserves 9 points. Syed Maaz
Jan 19th 2012
Aamna This story is good but sorry to say that this story has been cheated and should not be given the prize. Aamna
Jan 18th 2012

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