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Abeera Tariq
Abeera Tariq
Beaconhouse School System
Our Country Pakistan
Published On Jan 14th 2012
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January 2012

Rank 9 Out of 10
Everybody had an eye on,
The gem of the king’s crown.
The British attempted,
And their mission accomplished.
Started with trading,
But succeeded in manipulating.
Control of the Mughals got lost,
But Muslims still fought.
Slowly and gradually a thought struck,
“We should fight for a nation or We’ll be stuck.”
Allama Iqbal saw a vision,
Quaid-e-Azam took the supervision.
Led the Muslims and worked really hard,
Made a resolution at Minto Park.
Atrocities on the innocent Muslim pupils,
Were done by Hindus and British, the evils.
For Muslims, giving up was the last thing,
Fought until British heard their plead.
The British were persuaded,
“They need to be separated.”
Thus, an order was passed by Atlee,
1948, the year it was to be.
Violence grew and did not fall,
Mountbatten announced Partition should be done once for all.
Pakistan, a new nation appeared on the map,
Where Muslims had full freedom of act.
Could peacefully practice religion of Islam,
The Muslims were now very calm.
But money was a major turmoil,
Which buried them under soil.
Forgot their days and nights,
For development, they all did fight.
Rose high and were known to the world,
Now is a star because of the natural resources it holds.
History will repeat, that’s what we hear,
Of the Non-Muslim rule, citizens now fear.
Pakistan is getting in American hands,
Americans have very far plans.
Attention Youth! Be aware,
Work for the country but don’t fear,
Of the terror spread every where,
Do something to get peace which is no more here.

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Comments 17
Rabia Abeera u have a brother in nine class abrar Rabia
Mar 13th 2013
Abeera Thanks didn't know what to say but you said alot..:) Abeera
Apr 17th 2012
... I don't know what to say...:) I like it, its good...! =D ...
Apr 2nd 2012
Abeera Thanks Hamdia Abeera
Feb 18th 2012
Abeera Thanks alot Aisha.. Abeera
Feb 18th 2012
Hamdia Nice poem Hamdia
Feb 18th 2012
Aisha Really an awesome actually deserved to be the winner...a heartly congrtas to u Abeera aslo tells us briefly about history of pkaistan...once again well done..... Aisha
Feb 17th 2012
Abeera Thank you all for your lovely comments.. Salwa thank you for the appreciation. i really agree with you, we pakistanis really need to defend our country by our honesty,struggle,tolerance,sense of patriotism and brotherhood!!! Hubba, well i will be turning 15 in March and this poetry was done a few months earlier..... Abeera
Feb 15th 2012
Ushna Really Nice! Ushna
Feb 14th 2012
regulus It's SPECTACULAR! My, how old are you? This is likely to be written by a 15 year old or something. Regulus
Feb 12th 2012
Salwa OMG.....lovely poem...!! it's a great message to all of the Pakistanis either a Muslims or's the time to defend our country by our honesty,struggle,tolerance,sense of patriotism and brotherhood....!! dear Abeera ,thanks for reminding us our responsibilities...thanks a lot...superb work..!! Salwa
Feb 9th 2012
Zunaira Great Zunaira
Feb 4th 2012
Wasia I have no words.....speechless........simply HATS OFF!! Wasia
Feb 4th 2012
Laiba Congratulations!!!! Laiba
Feb 2nd 2012
Abeera Thanks alot...Azka and ahmed And Vshine..thankyou for choosing me as a my page winner...:) Abeera
Feb 1st 2012
Azka Great work, really like ur poem. I love u my dear country, Long live pakistan! Azka
Jan 31st 2012
Ahmed Wow wat a poem I luv my dear homeland Ahmed
Jan 31st 2012

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