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Aimen Mughal
Aimen Mughal
Army Puplic School Chaklala Rwp.
12 Months
Published On Jan 31st 2012
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Once upon a time, an old lady was going to her cabbage field. On her way there was a big cave which she has to cross. When she went into the cave she saw 12 men .one of these man asked the old lady that which month is the best. the old lady replied that every month is best in January there is snow on February there is rainfall and on march there are beautiful  flowers everywhere and all the other months are best too. All the men said that you are such a nice women you admires us all we are the 12 months put your basket and we will give you a gift. When the old woman saw that the basket was full of gold she thanked the 12 months and went home. Then she told his children about the gold and said that we would be rich soon. When her greedy neighbour came to know this the simple old lady told her the entire story. The greedy woman ran to that cave and then the 12 men said to her which month is the best then the greedy woman replied that every month is poor, stupid and bad. now give me some gold the men took the basket and covered it with rocks and leaves when the greedy woman opened the basket she was very angry she told the nice old women then she said who’s the hell of the person give gold if you say bad things to him.
 
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WARDAH Very nice story Wardah
Jan 18th 2013
 
 
Urwa Ali is right, you should know, that this story is taken from the book, "Des Des Ki Kahaniyaan". But you have changed it (very less though) , so it can be classified as your own. Urwa
Dec 7th 2012
 
 
(^_^) Nice story...! (^_^)
Nov 3rd 2012
 
 
rija Plzz add me aimen Rija
Nov 2nd 2012
 
 
Duaa Awesome story but you have quite alot of grammar mistakes Duaa
Oct 27th 2012
 
 
Simran Excellent story and again ali is saying that is cheated actually ali ur jealoused ur winning story cats,dogs and mice is also cheated.it was copied from my school book Simran
Aug 4th 2012
 
 
Aimen I like your picture sahar and rohma and thankyou all Aimen
May 10th 2012
 
 
rohma VERY NICE STORY :D Rohma
Apr 27th 2012
 
 
Aimen Thankyou for your lovely comments Aimen
Apr 10th 2012
 
 
Princess Hajra Nice story. can u be mu friend? Princess Hajra
Mar 16th 2012
 
 
Princess Hajra Its an excellent story. Princess Hajra
Mar 16th 2012
 
 
Sahar Excellent story Sahar
Mar 13th 2012
 
 
Aimen Thankyou very much Aimen
Feb 7th 2012
 
 
Izza A.O.A! Good story, aimen.....keep rocking....u rockstar! Izza
Feb 5th 2012
 
 
Aimen Thanks Tasbiha,Zuha and Aamna Aimen
Feb 4th 2012
 
 
Aimen Well,Ali i had written this story by myself Aimen
Feb 3rd 2012
 
 
fatima Nicey nice Fatima
Feb 2nd 2012
 
 
Ali This story is cheated. Ali
Feb 2nd 2012
 
 
Zuhaa Like with truth Zuhaa
Feb 1st 2012
 
 
Aamna Small story but good Aamna
Jan 31st 2012
 
 

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