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Izza Waheed
Izza Waheed
The Vision Group Of Colleges (vgc)
A New Rising Sun
Published On Jan 31st 2012
Total Comments : 20
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Hurry up, Annie! Yelled mom who was making breakfast for Annie. Coming mom! Annie said. Isn't Amli going to school today? Asked Annie while looking around for Amli. No, I’m not sure! Replied mom. Annie was surprised to find out Amli sleeping and it was about 7:45 a.m. Mom! Amli sure isn't going, said Annie.
Ok dear! said mom politely. Amli was awake inside her blanket & she had clearly heard all this conversation. She suddenly thought of going with dad to drop Annie at school. She stood up, went to washroom, washed her face, took her shawl & said: let's go! Annie looked at her from top to end & said: is it ok Amli? Oh yeah! Why are you asking this? Amli said. Nothing! Replied Annie.
Amli, dad & Annie sat in the car & dad drove the car smoothly through the heavy traffic. They enjoyed a great conversation on what to do after exams?
Dad, finally dropped Annie at school while Amli was sitting on the back seat. Dad asked her to come at the front seat. She came to the front seat & started staring the sun deeply. She thought of how the sun gives us light & warmth, which are a basic necessity of our lives. She remembered her rude behaviour towards others; she also remembered how she was disobedient with her parents, her teachers & her elders. She thought how much fun she made of her youngers, friends & those which were deaf & dumb.
She appreciated the sun in her heart for doing such a nice job. She said to herself: "it's not difficult for you Amli to do all this". Dad interrupted what are looking outside? She replied "sun". Dad understood everything.
On reaching home, she was totally a changed girl. Mom didn’t believe on her eyes that this is Amli. Dad already knew everything. Mom asked her what's going on. She told her the whole story. Mom said:" Amli is a new rising sun".
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Comments 20
Izza A0A...!! Jzakillah-0-Khairen-Kaseeran-wa-Kaseeraa.... Izza
Jul 23rd 2013
Ghumaisa Extra gr8 story Ghumaisa
Jul 15th 2013
Minahil Alllllllllllllllllllllllllllllaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Minahil
Jun 25th 2013
Raniah Superb ..... Raniah
Jul 7th 2012
Princess Hajra Nice story. Princess Hajra
Mar 29th 2012
xerac I love it ..... ;) Xerac
Mar 10th 2012
sarah NICE STORY ............. Sarah
Feb 23rd 2012
Izza A.O.A! I just thought of leaving VSHINE i was absent but when i saw my winner story..........i didn't like to leave it....that's all namra..:D lolx! Izza
Feb 19th 2012
Namra Very nice story.Moral story.It gives a appreciative moral.By the way Where were you from so many days? Namra
Feb 16th 2012
fasih GOOD Fasih
Feb 8th 2012
Izza A.O.A! Hey yo's, as soon as my new screen is launched please check out my latest "ABOUT ME" & vote for me..thanks. Izza
Feb 5th 2012
Izza A.O.A! Aimen, Jazakallah! try to participate in VSHINE as much as you can! thanks again. Izza
Feb 4th 2012
Aimen Hey Izza your stories are always Fantastic. Excellent effort. You rock! Aimen
Feb 4th 2012
Izza A.O.A! Thanks....a lot..please vote for my contributions..Jazakallah. Izza
Feb 3rd 2012
fatima Welcome back to V SHINE izza and rock again.V shine is enjoying no one can leave it! Fatima
Feb 2nd 2012
Ali You really not only rock, but your also one of the best story writers in vshineworld. Ali
Feb 2nd 2012
Momina WalaiKum Aslam! ur awesome. tooooooottttallly rock. where were you gone by the way? By looking at your comments, i feel embarrassed with myself! you always say A.O.A, and always have somthing nice to say! i like you alot. Have a nice time! Momina
Feb 2nd 2012
Zuhaa Yes u do Zuhaa
Feb 1st 2012
Aamna Good story Aamna
Jan 31st 2012
Izza A.O.A! I'll be waiting for your beautiful comments. At last, i've arrived inshallah i'll again ROCK in VSHINE.....please tell me that do i really rock? Izza
Jan 31st 2012

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