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Malaika Idrees
Malaika Idrees
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Trip To Planet Mars
Published On Jan 31st 2012
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I was shopping in the mall and was going to do the payment of a dress when I heard a voice of screaming. I did the payment quickly and then rushed down from the elevator and saw that a spaceship had landed. I saw some aliens coming out of the spaceship and saw that they all were saying my name. I got worried and ran to my house. I locked my room door and turned the television on. I saw the report of the aliens and ran to my window. I saw that the aliens were flying up and coming to my window. They held me with their arms and took me to their spaceship. They tied me with chains and I yelled, cried to set me free but they did not. Suddenly I felt asleep and then all went???           
When I woke up, I looked down from the window of the spaceship and found out that I was no longer on earth. Suddenly the door opened and they untied my chains and let me out. I found that I was on the planet mars.
A lot of alien guards were around me withy guns in their hands and an alien was leading them. Then a gate came and when was opened I saw the life on mars. I saw buildings, houses, shops and all things on earth but the colour was all red and instead of human beings there were aliens of green colour. But there were no factories and nor was mars polluted.
I was being taken to the king and when I saw him, I asked him that why was I brought in the palace and on mars, the king answered that I was the starter of the aliens and I was the one who brought life on mars. I asked how? He answered that it was only me on mars and no other alien so it was my myth that when a child would first laugh a life would start and anyone could laugh but a child first laugh in front of stars would start life on mars and so it was you. But now what concern do I have? I questioned. “Well we want you know this all and to tell how beautiful is your planet “Malaika”. I got shocked as it was mars but they were saying that it was named after me.
Some of the guards took me out and I saw what a beauty. I shopped, made new friends who were aliens, and mostly I enjoyed a lot. My spaceship to go back to earth was ready but I did not want to go but had to. I sat in the spaceship and rushed of to earth in it. The space ship went back to mars or should I say Malaika.
When I arrived I saw reporters and told them everything on mars.  I was on television. Suddenly my mother interrupted and said it was time to wake up and go to school. I opened my eyes and now had known that it was all a dream.  
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Comments 7
Princess Hajra Nice story malaika. Princess Hajra
Mar 16th 2012
Aimen Awesome story Aimen
Feb 10th 2012
amna It was cool! Amna
Feb 3rd 2012
Zuhaa Best dream Zuhaa
Feb 1st 2012
Momina Oh, thats a clever idea Malaika, putting your name in your story. good story Momina
Feb 1st 2012
Aamna Great Malaika Aamna
Jan 31st 2012
hurriya Nice malaika Hurriya
Jan 31st 2012

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