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Syed Maaz Bin Qamar
Syed Maaz Bin Qamar
Yanbu International School (yis)
You Always Need Your Mother
Published On Jan 12th 2012
Total Comments : 14
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Ahmed was very cruel to his mother and would never listen to her. His mother would say something and Ahmed would say that he's too busy to do that. He really didn't care about her and that's why he thought that he doesn’t need a mother.
One day when Ahmed came home after praying, he rang the bell but nobody opened the door. He rang the bell again but nobody came to open the door again. He knew that when he went to the mosque, his mom was there. His father was at work and there was no one at home except for his mother.
Ahmed knew that something was bad, so he ran up to the back door to climb up the house from the back. He jumped over the wall and went inside. He was shocked to see that his mother was been on the floor, dead. His mother had been stabbed by a knife right in her stomach. Ahmed became unconscious right after he saw this.
"Ahmed...Wake up! Why are you sleeping? It's fajr." Ahmed's dad yelled at him.
Ahmed suddenly woke up from his worst nightmare of his life. He now realized that the murder scene with his mother was just a dream. He still felt uneasy after this shocking dream and rushed to his mom's room to see if his mom is fine or not?
When he entered the room, he saw his mother sleeping and for the first time of his life, he felt proud to have a mother. From that point on, he realized the importance of his mother in his life. He then prayed fajr and made dua for his mother.
Now, Ahmed always listens to his mother and never wants her to be tired because he doesn’t want to lose her.

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Comments 14
Anam A good lesson sooooo touching.... Anam
Sep 21st 2013
Arouba Wow what an emotional story it was... pleased to know that his mother was alive!! maaz u r really a good writer so can u give me ideas about my second part of "secret of happiness", i'll be glad if u do! Arouba
Apr 27th 2013
Nameerah Y wasn't he the winner, he should've been the winner instead of Fasih Nameerah
Jan 31st 2012
Aamna Good story than Hamza Danial but not than fasih. Aamna
Jan 27th 2012
Syed Maaz Just don't forget to hit the "like";) Syed Maaz
Jan 23rd 2012
Urooj Owsommm.......:-) Urooj
Jan 23rd 2012
Bareera Nyc story Bareera
Jan 21st 2012
Syed Maaz Thanx guys!:D Syed Maaz
Jan 14th 2012
Aliza Amazing......but it made me cry. Aliza
Jan 14th 2012
fatima Very first i thought that his mother his really murdered before reading more when his father wake that moment i could feel my self sum story very hearty. Fatima
Jan 14th 2012
Laiba That ix tru3 Laiba
Jan 14th 2012
Aiman Excellent story,Amazing and Fanastic Aiman
Jan 12th 2012
Manahil Nice one ! Manahil
Jan 12th 2012
Anas Nice Story! A really good lesson.. FANTASTIC! Anas
Jan 12th 2012

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