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Abeer Daudpota
Abeer Daudpota
Bright Future Pakistan International School
The Black Eyed Bear
Published On Jan 31st 2012
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Once there was a little bear that was really sneaky she was always spying. One day her cousin was really irritated with her habit so he had a plan to teach her a lesson. He wants to her house and asked her if he could take some food "Sure" she replied. He asked her to bring the things but she asked him "Why do you need food". He replied because I'm going bird watching" Amanda told him he could take the things from the kitchen. He went in the kitchen to get the things. Now Amanda saw a bag she saw a pair of binoculars. Now she tried to see from the binoculars and suddenly her cousin arrived and started laughing at her "Why are you laughing? So he showed her the mirror and her eyes were covered with coal From then Amanda never sneaked or spied at anybody ever again.
 
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Wajeeha Very nice=) Wajeeha
Feb 13th 2012
 
 
Aimen I agree with zuhaa Aimen
Feb 3rd 2012
 
 
tasbiha Good+nice+fabulous=this story (according to my math) Tasbiha
Feb 2nd 2012
 
 
Momina I can. its simple. amanda, the bear, was a sneak. her cousin wanted to teach her a lesson. so he put coal (it should be tar) on the binoculars, because he knew amanda would look through them. the coal got on the sides of amanda's eyes, and made her 'black eyed'. so, thats why the story is called 'the black eyed bear'. nice story, but wayyy too many mistakes Momina
Feb 2nd 2012
 
 
Zuhaa Cant understand anything Zuhaa
Feb 1st 2012
 
 
Aamna Small Aamna
Jan 31st 2012
 
 

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