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Manahil Ahmed
Manahil Ahmed
Enchanted Forest
Published On Jan 5th 2012
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Once upon a time in a forest far away laid a village, a village full of magical beings such as a dog which has a face of a cat, a mouse which has a tail as large as a lion.....
The people in the real world believed that these all were made up by the imaginations of kids because the kids below the age of six could see them in their dreams not once but till they live.
This little village had a lot of greenery, vegetation, delicious pulpy fruits and stuff that a person can imagine of. The village lived in peace and harmony with each other and without any sort of fear or terror, but only till the `Dark Eagle` arrived. It was said that the `Dark Eagle` was the only creature who wanted the destruction of this peaceful village, but for a reason which was that the village had two jewels which were hidden in the two mountains which above the all `The Creaser Mountains`, these mountains were the most safe and hard to climb, only the very mighty animals could go up there.
One day when two of the great lion elephants were roaming around curiously in wait for their warrior badges they saw something flying high in the sky, the two mightiest were surprised that nothing was allowed to fly this high and towards the creaser mountains this was astonishing and shocking..., Then suddenly an alarm was ringed which meant to be the dark eagle alarm. Now every body had to go into the same roots except for the warriors. So the two mightiest rushed towards the mountains. It was just a split moment when they saw the terrifying eagle, and they were horrified, he had big sharp dirty claws and big hair, but as long as they had faith in them selves, they threw the arrows towards the eagle with full courage and the spears got into the eagle’s heart and that was it the end of the eagle. So now the great mighties were given an award and they lived their great lives just like always.
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Comments 16
FR NO.1 Well written but ending too abrupt Fr No.1
May 29th 2015
 
 
ramshah Well written Ramshah
Nov 11th 2013
 
 
Anam Great effort!!!!!! Anam
Sep 21st 2013
 
 
Soha Awesome... Soha
Feb 6th 2013
 
 
fatimah Just fine;) Fatimah
Jul 11th 2012
 
 
Manahil Yes maham i do live in fort colony Manahil
Jun 15th 2012
 
 
Maham Hi Manahil! Your story is awesome.I love this story.I want to ask that do u live in Fort Colony.I have seen u there in the park. Maham
Feb 3rd 2012
 
 
Urooj Nycccc one..........:) Urooj
Jan 23rd 2012
 
 
Zuhaa GGGGGGGGOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDD Zuhaa
Jan 21st 2012
 
 
Aliza Not so awesome Aliza
Jan 14th 2012
 
 
Laiba Nyc Laiba
Jan 14th 2012
 
 
fatima Guddy gud! Fatima
Jan 13th 2012
 
 
Manahil Thax all Manahil
Jan 12th 2012
 
 
Aimen GOOD EFFORT Aimen
Jan 9th 2012
 
 
Wajeeha AWESOME EFFORT! Wajeeha
Jan 8th 2012
 
 
Zahra Gud!! Zahra
Jan 6th 2012
 
 

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