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Fatima  Qasim
Fatima Qasim
Her Father
Published On Jan 5th 2012
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Katy was enjoying her new gift a bicycle from her father. She had been riding it for an hour and her friends Jim and Laura were watching her play. Suddenly two men dressed as jokers came and offered Jim and Laura some sweets. Before Jim could stop her Laura had taken a mouth full of candies. For a minute it seems that she likes the taste but second moment she had fainted. The two men were so quick that they bumped Laura into their circus van and driving away before Jim could even make a sound.
When Jim told Katy what had happened they ran straight to the police station. When Jim told officer what had happened Laura’s mother Mrs. Carter was also called to police station as well. She was being informed about the incident when she received a phone call.
The phone call was from kidnappers they had demanded a very high Ransom which Mrs. Carter cannot afford after hanging up Laura’s mother burst into tears and told officers about the conversation with kidnappers. The officer asked Jim and Katy to go back home. And he assured Mrs. Carter that an incident like Laura had happen before so they would be found and captured in three to four days a time. The third day came and Mrs. .Carter received a phone call from the officer, giving her good news that her daughter is with them and the kidnappers had been caught. So Mrs. Carter rush to police station and hugged Laura tightly, but at the moment the officer bought prison and Mrs. Carter was left in shock.
''CARL you.....!!!" Said Mrs. Carter to a man standing amongst the prisoner.
  "Is that girl 'Laura' our Laura?" said the man called Carl Carter.
   "Carl did you kidnap your own daughter; is this what you left me and Laura for?
   "I swear I did not know she was my daughter. I am so sorry!" Said Carl.
 "You are HER FATHER said Mrs. Carter.
From that day onwards Laura Carter grew up knowing up that her father was a criminal and so she decided that she would join the police and fight against the crime.
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Comments 23
Anam Great Anam
Sep 21st 2013
Rida A very nice story!!!!!!!!! :) hv u written it ur self Rida
Jul 2nd 2013
Soha Unpredictable one. Soha
Apr 7th 2013
Soha Excellent! Soha
Apr 7th 2013
Soha Unpredictable one. Soha
Apr 7th 2013
Soha Excellent! Soha
Apr 7th 2013
fatimah U r a frod emaan Fatimah
Oct 25th 2012
Emaan MashaAllah.May Allah bless you.(Amin) Great Story. Emaan
Jun 14th 2012
Emaan Nice Tasbiha!Now,I've got something to say,so read carefully everyone:When someone copies a story,poem article or anything else,many people exxagerate or you know,point out that the person who has written the story or whatever is copied and I know I do it myself,I will stop now :-) Emaan
May 10th 2012
xerac Really nyc........:) Xerac
Apr 10th 2012
Ayan Awesome story good title Ayan
Apr 9th 2012
Daim Gr8 and unpredictable story Daim
Mar 2nd 2012
hurriya Nice story Hurriya
Feb 5th 2012
fatima ThanXX UrooJ Fatima
Feb 2nd 2012
Urooj Its really interesting.....its ending is quite unexpectable.........i wasnt expecting..........but u gave turning p0int......this iz the best part 0ff the st0ry........:|) Urooj
Jan 23rd 2012
Aliza F9 thn Aliza
Jan 20th 2012
fatima Yes of course aliza i have written by my self. Fatima
Jan 14th 2012
Aliza Hmmmmmmmmmmm nyc if sdone by urself Aliza
Jan 14th 2012
Momina Mashallah; gr8 story Momina
Jan 11th 2012
fatima Thank you every one for appreciating me this is my second page on v shine and first on stories. Fatima
Jan 11th 2012
Aiman Very nice story Aiman
Jan 9th 2012
Ali GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ali
Jan 9th 2012
Wajeeha Nice story! Wajeeha
Jan 8th 2012

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