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Ahmed Mansoor Nami
Ahmed Mansoor Nami
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A Visit From Outerspace
Published On Dec 30th 2011
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December 2011
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Lubna and Ali were going to the park. On their way they saw a little girl crying. They decided to help her. They asked, “Why are you crying?” The girl suddenly turned into an alien. The children were astounded. “Hello! My name is Zock and I need fuel for my spaceship,” the alien said. Lubna and Ali led it to the nearest petrol station and showed it the petrol. ”No this isn’t fuel that I use for my ship,” said Zock. “What kind of fuel do you need and how can we make it?” asked Lubna. “We will need the venom of an adder and ten thorns of cactus. Then we have to mix and heat them,” answered Zock. Luckily there was a botanical garden nearby. They made a plan to distract the guard. Zock imitated the sound of a fire alarm and the guard rushed to the other side. They hurriedly collected the thorns. Next, they went to the zoo. There again they faced the guard problem. Zock imitated strange sounds which disturbed the howler monkeys and they started howling and the guard ran towards them. Zock took out a strange looking flask in which he took the venom. They went home, mixed and heated it. Before Zock went home, he gave them a special whistle and said, “If you ever need me, blow this whistle and I’ll be there.” With that he jumped into his spaceship and headed home.
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Comments 19
Muhammad Zia Amazing Muhammad Zia
Oct 26th 2013
 
 
Anam Nice Anam
Sep 21st 2013
 
 
Amna Ahmed keep it up and..................congratulations:-) Amna
Nov 3rd 2012
 
 
Urooj Wa000 nyc imaginati0n..............congrates............and 1 suggestion.....for making the fuel the alien needed the venom of vampire........this would make the story interseting......anyway i like it al0t....:)) Urooj
Jan 23rd 2012
 
 
Urooj Wa000 nyc imaginati0n..............congrates............and 1 suggestion.....for making the fuel the alien needed the venom of vampire........this would make the story interseting......anyway i like it al0t....:)) Urooj
Jan 23rd 2012
 
 
Malaika Great work congradulations Malaika
Jan 22nd 2012
 
 
Ahmed Mansoor Thanks Ahmed Mansoor
Jan 15th 2012
 
 
Aliza Congrats k3p it up Aliza
Jan 14th 2012
 
 
javeria Hey Ahmed mansoor just wanted to know if you got your gift hamper for being a my page winner and if you did can you please tell me how and when because I have won this too but haven't got my gift yet? And anyway good story though! Javeria
Jan 14th 2012
 
 
zahra Congragulation!! Zahra
Jan 12th 2012
 
 
fatima Ha very nice!imaginative........... Fatima
Jan 11th 2012
 
 
fatima Congratz! Fatima
Jan 11th 2012
 
 
Syed Zohan I enjoy this story!:) Syed Zohan
Jan 10th 2012
 
 
Laiba Congratulations!!!!!!!!!! Laiba
Jan 9th 2012
 
 
fatima Nice story ............keep it up.......... Fatima
Jan 8th 2012
 
 
syeda Congrates Syeda
Jan 8th 2012
 
 
Laiba Congratulations Ahmed.. Laiba
Jan 7th 2012
 
 
Aimen Well written Aimen
Jan 7th 2012
 
 
Ahmed Wow wat a story keep it up Ahmed
Jan 6th 2012
 
 

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