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Shayan Farooq
Shayan Farooq
Omar And Zoriab
Published On Dec 8th 2011
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Once upon a time there were two friends named Omar and Zoriab. Zoriab was good boy who always listened to his mom but his friend was not at all a good boy. After their home time, Omar liked to go by other ways but Zoriab warned him but he didn't listened, sometimes they went to a park near the school. In the park there was a tree in which they played and sometimes Omar took a fruit from the tree and ate. One day Omar got a new bad idea. His idea was that he will do mess in the park by throwing trash. When he was going to do the mess, the owner of the park caught him and shouted at him and said ''Never come here again''. From that time Omar never took another way from school and became a good boy.
 
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Comments 8
Uswah Boring................ never mind! Uswah
Jul 14th 2013
 
 
Emaan Before joining this website I read Vshine and I noticed THIS story in the young writers section!I loved it!Goodjob! Emaan
Apr 4th 2012
 
 
saamia A SMALL BUT INTERESTING STORY I REALLY LIKE IT Saamia
Dec 27th 2011
 
 
Aliza Gud Aliza
Dec 25th 2011
 
 
Ahmed Good work Ahmed
Dec 16th 2011
 
 
Laiba Good work Shayan. Laiba
Dec 15th 2011
 
 
shayan Thankyou for sending me a comment.I will wright more stories. Shayan
Dec 12th 2011
 
 
usaidkhan VERY SHORT STORY BUT NICE STORY. GOOD WORK Usaidkhan
Dec 10th 2011
 
 

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