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Saem Junaid
Saem Junaid
Gsis School
Big Alien
Published On Nov 23rd 2011
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When the earthquake came the army's so many people were dead. Their army again makes a big army and did their work.
Two weeks later an alien came who was as big as an elephant. He attacked the army like a lion. They all tried to kill it but the alien was much big that he did not get any scratch. The alien was angry so he attacked the army and killed so many people of the army. A man came to the king and gave him a golden sword. King was angry as a bull so he threw the sword into the alien's head.
After killing the alien they all were ready for the next battle and lived happily again.

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Comments 11
Ibrahim Haha happy ending ) but realy boring Ibrahim
Jan 5th 2012
 
 
Affan Boring Affan
Dec 24th 2011
 
 
Ahmed Short n good story Ahmed
Dec 16th 2011
 
 
Aimen OMG soooo boring Aimen
Dec 13th 2011
 
 
Omama Boring and lame!!!!!!! Omama
Dec 9th 2011
 
 
aamna Very bad story Aamna
Dec 5th 2011
 
 
fasih This story is very boring, it does not make any sense but I think you can improve. Fasih
Nov 30th 2011
 
 
Bareera Nice Bareera
Nov 28th 2011
 
 
Momina No offence, but uhhhh.... I don't like the story so much. you also have alot of grammar mistakes, but dont worry, you can improve , Inshallah! Momina
Nov 28th 2011
 
 
l NICE ONE.... L
Nov 25th 2011
 
 
mary very boring Mary
Nov 25th 2011
 
 

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