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Aimen Mughal
Aimen Mughal
Army Puplic School Chaklala Rwp.
Walking Stick
Published On Sep 4th 2012
Total Comments : 15
Total Views :  1695
9 People Like this!


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Once upon a time, there was a boy named Abu. Abu’s parents were killed by Dollah, his powerful and evil uncle. Dollah threw Abu and his sister, Maya, out of their house and took away their possessions. Nothing was left for children except an old walking stick. Abu and his sister Maya used the walking stick to perform some tricks in the market place. It was the only way that they were able to earn some money
One evening, when the siblings were performing in the streets, Abu held the walking stick close to his heart, suddenly, there was a brilliant flash of light and floating before him was an angel.
"I will appear every time you hold the walking stick close to your heart. Now, let me grant you a wish, "it said. Abu and Maya were very happy when they heard this. They wished at once to be well-off. In an instant, everything changed. The children were wearing the best clothes that money could buy and Maya’s neck and arms were adorned with exquisite jewellery. Both the children were standing in a palace. The generous children shared their never-ending wealth with the poor.
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Comments 15
Aimen LOL fatima :D i published it as soon as POSSIBLE :p and thank you Ayesha...i have accepted your request :) Aimen
Jul 17th 2015
Fatima Congrantz Aimen you managed to publish the last part (of a friend in need is a friend indeed) after two years -_- Fatima
Apr 24th 2015
Ayesha And your screen pic is so cool .I love elsa + frozen Ayesha
Apr 16th 2015
Ayesha I sended you reqest pls accept it Ayesha
Apr 16th 2015
Ayesha 1000 views and just 10 comments thats not fair to you Ayesha
Apr 16th 2015
Aimen Thanxxx Momina and dua :) and Khadija,Fatima dont worry now.Now you can read the last part of Friend in need :) Aimen
Mar 31st 2015
Momina Reminds me kinda of Aladdin good Momina
Dec 22nd 2012
Duaa Gud story Duaa
Oct 27th 2012
Aimen Thankyou all Aimen
Sep 27th 2012
arifa Yup! i totally agree with da other vshineworld crazies! short and interestin!! ITS A THUMBS...UP ofsourse :) Arifa
Sep 26th 2012
arifa AMAZING, dude!! Arifa
Sep 26th 2012
Fatima Aimen when r u going to publish a friend in need 3? waiting............... Fatima
Sep 13th 2012
Emaan Yeah,I like it! But you could have added adventure to the story,the uncle found out that they were'nt poor as he wanted them to be and he tried to steal the walking stick..... But this is the original,and I <3 it! Emaan
Sep 8th 2012
Khadijah Very nice Publish your story (A friend In need...............) soon I can't wait. !!!!!!!!!!! Khadijah
Sep 6th 2012
Fatima Short but nice Fatima
Sep 5th 2012

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