Once upon a time, there was a boy named Abu. Abu’s parents were killed by Dollah, his powerful and evil uncle. Dollah threw Abu and his sister, Maya, out of their house and took away their possessions. Nothing was left for children except an old walking stick. Abu and his sister Maya used the walking stick to perform some tricks in the market place. It was the only way that they were able to earn some money One evening, when the siblings were performing in the streets, Abu held the walking stick close to his heart, suddenly, there was a brilliant flash of light and floating before him was an angel. "I will appear every time you hold the walking stick close to your heart. Now, let me grant you a wish, "it said. Abu and Maya were very happy when they heard this. They wished at once to be well-off. In an instant, everything changed. The children were wearing the best clothes that money could buy and Maya’s neck and arms were adorned with exquisite jewellery. Both the children were standing in a palace. The generous children shared their never-ending wealth with the poor.
Yeah,I like it! But you could have added adventure to the story,the uncle found out that they were'nt poor as he wanted them to be and he tried to steal the walking stick..... But this is the original,and I <3 it!
Sep 8th 2012
Very nice Publish your story (A friend In need...............) soon I can't wait. !!!!!!!!!!!