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Lionel Messi
Lionel Messi
My Family
Published On Nov 12th 2011
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November 2011

Rank 6 Out of 10
I have a water fountain in my house,        
That relates to all the family members of my house.
The glass wall that protects the fountain,
Is like my grandmother who with her prayers protects us from evil like a chaplain.
The large water machine that has to water gather,
Is like my supportive father.
My mother is the green leaves in the fountain that bloom,
That makes the place beautiful and takes away the house gloom.
The gold fish that swims in the water gives beauty to the fountain's exterior,
Is like my aunt who with her aesthetic sense gives elegance to the house interior.
My sister is the flower that blooms and gives fragrance,
And makes the house pleasant with her appearance.
The water that makes a splashing sound,
Is like my irritating brother who though is worth more than a pound.
The light bulbs in the fountain that highlight the beauty,
Are like me from my family,
Because now like I am appreciating the beauty,
Of my family
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Comments 20
Daniyal Gr8 Daniyal
Nov 16th 2012
Lionel Hey Duaa I m in class 8-c nd i m in morning shift nd i will luv 2 meet u!!!!!!!!!!! Lionel
Jan 4th 2012
asma Gooooooooood Asma
Jan 4th 2012
Duaa Can you just tell in which class you are? cause i really loved your poem and wish to meet you and read more of them. even i am of st. patricks girls high school class 9. read my poems too on my page, vshine. Duaa
Dec 30th 2011
muzna Coooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllllll Muzna
Dec 22nd 2011
alina Gr88888888888888888888888.....And Congratzzzzzzzzzzzxxxxxxyyyyyy....... Alina
Dec 19th 2011
AFNAN Nyc 1! Afnan
Dec 13th 2011
simra Nice poem Simra
Dec 6th 2011
Shahamah Excellent!! Shahamah
Dec 5th 2011
Sikander I really like the poem it is a very nyc idea to compare ur family with a thing. Sikander
Dec 5th 2011
Salwa Congratss Salwa
Dec 5th 2011
Danish Badar Nice one and congratz Danish Badar
Dec 3rd 2011
Laiba Congratzzzzzzzz !!!!!!!!!! Laiba
Dec 2nd 2011
Disenchanted. Very nice! and congrats Disenchanted.
Dec 1st 2011
Momina Never lose heart, and keep up the grrr8 work. Momina
Nov 28th 2011
Lionel Thanx every1 Lionel
Nov 18th 2011
Momina Nice poem. today was my result day and im in a good mood i got great marks: 3 +A 4 A 2 B Momina
Nov 18th 2011
Manal Aws0me Manal
Nov 17th 2011
yamna Awesome........... Yamna
Nov 17th 2011
Urooj Its sooooo nyc !!!!!!!! keep it up>....... Urooj
Nov 17th 2011

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