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Maryam Aamir
Maryam Aamir
Horrible Dream
Published On Nov 6th 2011
Total Comments : 53
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Once a girl name Aqsa who was a nice and foolish girl. One day she woke up and saw every thing is different. One side has day and other has night. The doors of houses are above the windows and the boy has three legs. She thought that this all work should be done by Wilma the witch. After half hour she went to Wilma’s house. When she entered the house; she said "oh Wilma you are doing wrong" Wilma said "oh sweet young girl come with me I have made a bowl of pudding for you" Aqsa love pudding so she followed to reach in dinning room for some yummy pudding.
When she ate all pudding again she felt some thing different. "ha ha ha" Wilma laugh and said "I put some poison in it and you will die after few minutes." Aqsa shocked and said "what: nnnnnooooooo."
Tring tring tring this is her alarm clock. Aqsa woke and run towards window; she saw every thing is alright. She thanked God that it was her horrible dream.

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Comments 53
Maryam Yeah why not? I would love to be your friend. Maryam
Jan 21st 2016
Hamdah wasif I want to be ur friend would u like to add me Hamdah Wasif
Jan 8th 2016
Maryam No need of thanx its my pleasure :) :p Maryam
Jan 3rd 2015
yusra Thanks for accepting my friend request Yusra
Dec 25th 2014
Maryam Yes!!!! i love to be your friend :o) ^.^ Maryam
Dec 25th 2014
yusra Nice one,please be my friend maryam amir Yusra
Dec 24th 2014
Maryam No need of thanx de@r!!!!!!!!! Its my duty to @ccept your request @s you @re such @ sweet girl and you @re new here :@) I wish you would h@ve m@ny friends here!!!!!!! :D :o) Maryam
Aug 26th 2014
Syeda Zuha Thanksssssssssss a lot to add me as a friend%u2665%u2665 Syeda Zuha
Aug 25th 2014
Shaheer Hey its funny. The stories is fine but words are funny. :) And i agree with Wajeeha. But the error was how can she be a witch's friend while the witch was killing her > Anyways good try. Your nortious room should be published din library i should say. :-) Shaheer
Aug 16th 2014
Maryam Firstly thanx for your comment. Secondly I wrote this story when I was 10. I know its stupid story cuz every time I read it I laugh on me. Maryam
Jul 20th 2014
Areesha Ha ha ha foolish Aqsa Areesha
Jul 20th 2014
Hiba Through which bard r u giving ur exams ? and Best of luck. :). I hope the best for u :) Hiba
Jan 29th 2014
Maryam My pre-board exams are approaching so i am studying hard. Maryam
Jan 27th 2014
Hiba Ummm.. my plaesure maryam . whats going on? Hiba
Jan 23rd 2014
Maryam Oh thank you thank you thank you. i think this what i should say because i also don't know what to say. Maryam
Jan 17th 2014
Hiba Uff... u always leave me speachless my dear :) Hiba
Jan 16th 2014
Maryam Aww thats so sweet of you. Maryam
Jan 13th 2014
Hiba Hahahh , it was even my pleasure appreciating u :) Hiba
Jan 12th 2014
Maryam Now what should say. My pleasure :))) Maryam
Jan 6th 2014
Hiba Well i have to mention it . :p Hiba
Dec 29th 2013
Maryam Mention not Maryam
Dec 22nd 2013
Hiba @Fatima , yaar accept my friend request and it was 11-12-13 not 11-11-11. im sorry if u mind but I was just telling u? wanna be my best buddy? :D @Maryam u are the most welcome Hiba
Dec 13th 2013
Maryam Thanx dear Hiba! Maryam
Dec 12th 2013
Tooba Exelent Tooba
Dec 12th 2013
Hiba I love this story<33333333333 Hiba
Dec 10th 2013
Maryam Thank you yar! Maryam
Dec 1st 2013
Gul Noor Awwsssoooommmmmme , yaar!!wat can i say??????? Gul Noor
Dec 1st 2013
Maryam Thanx dear Nuzhat Maryam
Nov 17th 2013
Nuzhat Gud 1 and f9 Nuzhat
Nov 17th 2013
Maryam Thanx Maryam
Nov 12th 2013
Urooj Interesting.......i love it............although the dream was really HORRIble.......:-phahahaha Urooj
Jan 23rd 2012
sumaiya very nice ! Sumaiya
Jan 5th 2012
Arshia This is a good story but Maryam sorry to say there are tons of grammatical mistakes. You should improve in this and modify your ideas. Arshia
Dec 22nd 2011
syed saad What a horrible dream i am gettin heart attaks Syed Saad
Dec 20th 2011
Aimen Hey wajeeha i am not jealoused the stories i like i write good comments and the stories i dont like i should write that.The word COMMENT means to write if you like or not like Aimen
Dec 16th 2011
fatima Really horrible dream it was but this story is really nice! Fatima
Dec 7th 2011
Maryam Being a nice girl it was her quality and Wajeeha thankyou for your favour but she does not hurt me well your message is good. Maryam
Dec 4th 2011
Wajeeha Aiman its not nyc to say boring if you say so it can only mean your jealous and by the way Muslims should not hurt others feelings!!! NYC STORY Wajeeha
Dec 1st 2011
Bareera Fatima u can add ur page by clicking on ADD YOUR PAGE button Bareera
Nov 28th 2011
syeda tahira Hmmm its just ok Syeda Tahira
Nov 25th 2011
fatima Hi Freind's I want to post stories, articles, jokes, and drawing's, but I cant. Can you tell me how to do that... Fatima
Nov 24th 2011
Nov 21st 2011
hamza Just ok Hamza
Nov 17th 2011
Aimen BORING:( Aimen
Nov 15th 2011
Syed Zohan Good. Syed Zohan
Nov 14th 2011
Nov 13th 2011
Momina Nyc. Momina
Nov 12th 2011
Maryam Thankyou every one Maryam
Nov 11th 2011
fatima Today is a special day. 11-11-11 This date will come back after 100 years. So lets enjoy this date to keep in our memory Fatima
Nov 11th 2011
fatima Hi Freind's, I am new here, and this is my first comment. Your story was very nice. Keep it up. Fatima
Nov 10th 2011
Izza A.O.A! EID mubarik to my all dearest friends!!!!! J.K. Izza
Nov 9th 2011
Mahnoor Gud 1 Mahnoor
Nov 8th 2011
Wajeeha Nyc Wajeeha
Nov 7th 2011

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