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Syeda Tahira Iqbal
Syeda Tahira Iqbal
Ibn Seena English High School
Ice Cream
Published On Nov 4th 2011
Total Comments : 23
Total Views :  1164
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November 2011

Rank 7 Out of 10
The cone of crispy biscuit,
With sweet vanilla filling on top,
The hot chocolate melting on it,
With a lick I am swirling in magic,
A tingling sensation of excitement,
When there is the last touch,
A sweet sweet cherry in red,
In moments I am ice cream fed,
Now my hands are bare,
And now I don’t have my ice cream and it isn’t fair...............
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Comments 23
abeera Nice one Abeera
Aug 7th 2014
Daniyal Which flavour u like the most Daniyal
Nov 16th 2012
syeda tahira Thnks every1 seriously your comments added more sugar to my ice cream Syeda Tahira
Nov 16th 2012
syeda tahira I wont think you are insane safa i am not laiba and sorry javeria i couldnt and wont be able to answer your question as i got no gift from v shine as i live in dubai and i dont know how to get a gift in dubai Syeda Tahira
Jan 27th 2012
javeria Hey syeda i just wanted to know that did you get a gift for being the winner at my page poem? and if you did then how and after how many days? Javeria
Jan 13th 2012
areeba Well done!****************************! Areeba
Jan 6th 2012
Jan 4th 2012
asma U r intelligent nice goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd poem Asma
Jan 4th 2012
Duaa Amazing poem!!!! congrats!!! i can understand your feelings for getting the gift by v shine as i was when i won!! Duaa
Dec 30th 2011
muzna A best whishes of cocolate a vanilla and stabery excellent Muzna
Dec 19th 2011
Manahil Wow......wonderful and pretty impresive Manahil
Dec 7th 2011
Saba Nyc Saba
Dec 5th 2011
Salwa Nice poem..just work more harder for your future...i hope you can make more tasty and yummy poems as it is...:D well congratzzzzz......keep it up..=) Salwa
Dec 5th 2011
syeda tahira Thank you every1 a lot Syeda Tahira
Dec 3rd 2011
Laiba Congrats!! Laiba
Dec 2nd 2011
Shahamah Congrats Shahamah
Dec 1st 2011
Ahmed Congrats!! Ahmed
Dec 1st 2011
Zainab Yummmyyyy aahhhhhhh the crispy biscuit,sweet vanilla,hot chocolate... its just toooo yummy!!!keep up the gr8 work!!!! Zainab
Dec 1st 2011
syeda tahira Thanx every1 fr thr wndrful cmmnts especially thanx 2 momina and daniyal : ) Syeda Tahira
Nov 28th 2011
Momina Really nice poem. Mashallah, Allah has gblessed you with a very imaginative mind, which is is used quite well. Momina
Nov 28th 2011
syed saad Nyc this will and surely be in v shine magazine Syed Saad
Nov 7th 2011
syeda tahira Thanx daniyal a lot Syeda Tahira
Nov 7th 2011
Daniyal I love ICECREAM as well as ur poem......= Daniyal
Nov 5th 2011

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