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Sameed Ashfaq
Sameed Ashfaq
Beacounhouse School System
A Helpful Tree
Published On Oct 30th 2011
Total Comments : 27
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October 2011

Rank 8 Out of 10
Once upon a time, there was a poor boy lived in the village named "Haris" and there was also a tree far away from the village, the tree was Haris’s best friend. In his childhood he played with tree and do arrow shooting to his enemy from the branches of the tree. When he got injured by stones and other things, he pasted the tree's leaves on his worn and when he got tired he slept on the branches of the tree.
When he was young he was passing from the tree so the tree shouts "Play with me Haris play!”. He replied "How can I play with you I have to give food to my younger siblings", tree said "This is no big problem break my fruits and give it to your young siblings". He broke down fruits of the tree and went to his home and gave them fruits.
Haris was now a young man. He met the tree and said about his problem. "I have no money for my wife and children" so the tree replied, "Cut my branches and sell it to in the market so you can earn money for your family". He cut the branches of the tree and went market for selling them so he can earn money.
The tree always helps Haris in every matter and it is we call "The friend in need is the friend indeed"
(Translated from Urdu)

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Comments 27
maryam I have not read it!but it is nice and congratulation Maryam
Dec 10th 2011
Disenchanted. He wrote the story finish he will not cheat again !!! MATTER IS OVER!!! Disenchanted.
Dec 4th 2011
fatima I haven't read this story before in Urdu or in English but if they are saying that you had copied it than you shouldn't have done this.well it's a very good story and at least you tell truth. Fatima
Nov 29th 2011
Bareera Congratz Bareera
Nov 28th 2011
Syed Zohan I think every one is gealous any how it is good story Syed Zohan
Nov 25th 2011
Wajeeha Come on stop fighting.. so what if he translated or copied it.. at least he tried that's what matters!! Wajeeha
Nov 24th 2011
syeda tahira This is not fair i have read this in a tinkle comic and this shouldnt be a winner ( dont take it personally) but its true . Syeda Tahira
Nov 22nd 2011
Fatima Which means SAMEED is a CHEATER!!! Fatima
Nov 22nd 2011
Fatima All of u r saying the truth but it is a very interesting story.and i know from where sameed has copied it.:) Fatima
Nov 19th 2011
fasih I have read this story in english on internet. Sorry to say but this story is cheated. We can also read a story in urdu and then translate it in english. Fasih
Nov 17th 2011
Aimen Not special, Alina has written the best story ever she should win Aimen
Nov 16th 2011
Abdullah Very good. tell me what was prize Abdullah
Nov 15th 2011
laiba Keep it up!!!! Laiba
Nov 8th 2011
Aliza Congrats've done a great job. Aliza
Nov 6th 2011
Maham Congrats Maham
Nov 5th 2011
Momina It is a great story, and its great you told the truth about taking it from a book. Momina
Nov 5th 2011
Maryam Congratulation!!! but I also read this story many times ..... Maryam
Nov 2nd 2011
Abdur-Rahman Ahmed,I have read it in English.I would like to inform you that i am a sri lankan And that i don't know.I have it in english several times. Abdur-rahman
Nov 1st 2011
Manal Yes Agreed with Alina n as well as Ahmed... but u have done nyc translation btw CONGRATES ! Manal
Nov 1st 2011
Bint waseem Guys...guys when he is sayin that he has translated in english then whta the problem???(em not sayin angrily). gud job sameed!! Bint Waseem
Nov 1st 2011
Arshia People.. it takes time to translate from urdu to english... but still. congratulations.,...i wonder what gift u and i will get Arshia
Nov 1st 2011
sameed Thank you! very much . Sameed
Nov 1st 2011
alina It is not in urdu...It is in English.... Alina
Nov 1st 2011
Ahmed U people r saying its copied but i've read this story in Urdu. if someone has tried to write it in English then i think its not bad Ahmed
Nov 1st 2011
Abdur-Rahman I absolutely agree with you Alina because i have read this story many times.I don't understand that how in the world that he become the winner of October.Don't think i am jealous of you.Though its a wonderful story it is completely copied.You write something of your own imagination man,Not copied.I hope my story will be published. Abdur-rahman
Oct 31st 2011
Mahnoor Congratulation!!!! Mahnoor
Oct 31st 2011
alina I am feeling very sorry to say but this story has been cheated from the story book... Alina
Oct 31st 2011

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