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Shahmeer Bin Akram
Shahmeer Bin Akram
Beaconhouse School System
Sam And The Gigantic Strawberry
Published On Oct 14th 2011
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One day a boy Sam sitting at the window of room and watching sky suddenly a thing like a shiny star came to his garden from sky, he was shocked when he saw the thing like a shiny star he went to his garden to check out the thing which was shining in his garden. When he reached to garden he realized that it is a gigantic strawberry there was a hole in strawberry he felt that someone is calling him from inside. He went inside the gigantic strawberry it was so sticky and juice of strawberry was falling down then he crawled and crawled and then he saw an another world, in this world everything was made up of strawberry, strawberry mountains, river of strawberry juice and the people of this world was like cartoons and people of gigantic strawberry welcomed him. Sam enjoyed very much in the world of strawberry and people of gigantic strawberry did nice hospitality of Sam then Sam said I don't want to go but I have to go now but I will miss this world and all of you. Sam went out from gigantic strawberry and went to his room and again stood at the window of room then he saw the shiny gigantic strawberry went up towards sky and hidden in the sky. When Sam returned to home his mother asked where you were. He said that "I was in strawberry heaven where I enjoyed very much".

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Comments 13
Zuhaa I wish I was also there because I like strawberry Zuhaa
Jan 26th 2012
 
 
Alyina It is based on James and the Giant Peach and its also taken frm Step Ahead. Wafa, everyone has different preferences, if u don't like it's genre, then u cannot blame the writer. It's ur own choice. Alyina
Dec 2nd 2011
 
 
Omama Its copied from james and the giant peach by roald dahl.the title is different but story base is same and wafa i agree with you Omama
Nov 25th 2011
 
 
Bareera Nyc 1 Bareera
Oct 28th 2011
 
 
Izza You are cool...J.K.! Izza
Oct 24th 2011
 
 
Bint waseem Gud ! Bint Waseem
Oct 22nd 2011
 
 
Aliza Its ok if its copied Aliza
Oct 21st 2011
 
 
Bakhita Yeh it's copied from Step Ahead not same to same but the idea is taken from there! Bakhita
Oct 19th 2011
 
 
syed saad Copied Syed Saad
Oct 15th 2011
 
 
Wafa I UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU SAY ABEER BUT IT DEPENDS ON YOU AND ME MAYBE YOU LIKE MAGIC STORIES BUT I DON'T. Wafa
Oct 15th 2011
 
 
Abeer Stories are stories, real or full of magic. There are many stories in the world which are full of magic. Abeer
Oct 14th 2011
 
 
Wafa DON'T WRITE STORIES WHICH ARE NOT REAL AND ARE OF MAGIC OR WHICH ARE OF NONSENSE HUH! AND DO NOT START FIGHTING OR WRITE FALSE COMMENTS Wafa
Oct 14th 2011
 
 
Ahmed Nice story but shahmeer u havnt made ur screen Ahmed
Oct 14th 2011
 
 

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