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Ariba Asif
Ariba Asif
Habib Girls School
My Father
Published On Oct 14th 2011
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My Father is very nice
And he sometimes eats fries
He is very strong
And he is never wrong
He mostly loves us
And says to my mom, "Don't travel in bus"
He drives the car very safely
And sometimes drives very slowly
He never eats junk food
And always eat healthy food
He works with his mind
My father is very kind









    

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Comments 6
Ellina Plz encourage her !!!!!!!!!!Don't get her hopes down! Ellina
Nov 1st 2013
 
 
Wafa Nice poem Wafa
Oct 14th 2013
 
 
Daniyal Wafa u should not say like this to any one khadija is saying totally right Daniyal
Aug 25th 2012
 
 
Muhammad Yes Khadja is saying right.... Muhammad
Feb 28th 2012
 
 
l Wafa I think it is her first poem so you SHOULD encourage her and say her good....... L
Oct 15th 2011
 
 
Wafa SILLY OR GOOD CAN'T CHOOSE WHAT TO WRITE Wafa
Oct 15th 2011
 
 

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