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Abeer Amir
Abeer Amir
Talent International School
The Beautiful Girl
Published On Oct 14th 2011
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Once upon a time, there lived girl whose name was Alina, she was very beautiful but there was one fault in her. She was blind and can't read or write. Her mother passed away when she was only 5 and her father passed away when she was 13 years old, then she was cared by her grand mother. She was very kind and good to her. They were living in a small hut and they were very poor because Alina can't do any work because she was blind and her grand mother also can't do any work because she had pain in her legs and was growing older day by day. One day in winter they were very hungry and there was nothing to eat, Alina and her grand mother went out in the search of food they searched and searched there was nothing to eat, far away they saw a fair, they decided to go to the fair. In the fair the games were going on and there were many people enjoying, on the corner they saw a game. they went there and Alina decided to take part in that game, in that game there were many food items and the participants have to tell the name of that food item, as  Alina was blind her sense of smell was sharp, she told all the names of the food item correctly so in the price she got some money to buy the food, she went to the market and brought some food, they took that food and went back to their hut, in the way back to her home she saw a little girl who was very  hungry, by seeing her she gave her the food which she brought for her, and said to the little girl to pray for her. After going home she was trying to sleep but she can't sleep because of hunger, at that moment, one car stopped and one lady came out from the car, when she saw the blind girl and her grand mother she decided to give her grand mother a work in her house. She asked Alina's grand mother to come with her to her house. Alina and her grand mother agreed and went with the lady and lived happily ever after.

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Comments 12
Minahil Good one! you,re the best. Minahil
Apr 7th 2013
Alyina Me 2 it makes no sense Alyina
Dec 2nd 2011
omar I also agree with bakheta ang abdur rehman Omar
Nov 1st 2011
Bareera Nyc Bareera
Oct 28th 2011
Bareera Nyc Bareera
Oct 28th 2011
Ali I also agree with Bakhita and Abdur-rehman, it does not make any sense at all. Ali
Oct 27th 2011
Abdur-Rahman No sense at all.I agree with Bakhita Abdur-rahman
Oct 26th 2011
Izza A.O.A! Keep rockin'...Abeer..! J.K. Izza
Oct 24th 2011
Aliza Fair Aliza
Oct 21st 2011
Bakhita At first u wrote, they could not work because Alina was blind and grandma ill so wat came after that they were able to go and work with the lady?? and why on earth would they live happily ever after by just being a servant! sorry but it makes no sense!!! Bakhita
Oct 19th 2011
Oct 15th 2011
Bint waseem Gud try! Bint Waseem
Oct 15th 2011

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