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Wafa Waheed
Wafa Waheed
Waheed Academy
The Bad Boy
Published On Sep 30th 2011
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Once upon a time, there was a boy. His name was Amir. He was study in 7th class. He was 12 years old. He had three brother and two sisters. His sister and brothers were very good. But, Amir was a bad boy. Amir lied with his family. He didn’t respect his elder brothers and sisters and his mother and father. His mother was a doctor and his mother was nice. His father was a professor and he was a gentle-man. He always failed in his class. He cheated with everyone in papers. Amir didn’t complete his homework. He wore dirty cloths. All time his father and mother said that respect your elders. But, he didn’t listen. Amir would chat on facebook. His mother and father were worried for Amir. He didn't offer five time prayer. Amir was a hungry boy. All time he would present in the market to buy lays, candies, slanties, and bubbles. Amir was very fat.
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Comments 28
Saqifa I am also 10, read class 6. Same like Wafa. Saqifa
Nov 20th 2015
 
 
Tooba I think this is incomplete Tooba
Jul 6th 2014
 
 
Fatima Abdul A very nice story.keep it up Fatima Abdul
Jan 15th 2012
 
 
Alyina A very unimpressive story for a child of 10 years. Alyina
Dec 2nd 2011
 
 
Aaiza Its nice Aaiza
Nov 23rd 2011
 
 
Izza Wafa this story is wonderful,,,great job,,,keep it up Izza
Nov 13th 2011
 
 
Bint waseem @wafa my skol name is SHEIKH KHSLIFA BIN ZAYED ARAB PAK SCHOOL,ABU DHABI ,UAE. Bint Waseem
Oct 29th 2011
 
 
Wafa My name is wafawaheed.I am 10 years old.I study in 6th class,sorry for late reply because i am busy in my school work.What is your school name? Wafa
Oct 25th 2011
 
 
Wafa Hi alina!!!!!!!!!!!!! i will be admisssion in International Islamic Univeristy Islamabad Schools.I am very happy.How are you Wafa
Oct 25th 2011
 
 
Bint waseem Hi..wafa my name is zuha waseem..i am 13 years old,studin in grade 7.....sorry 4 late reply...cuz i didnt saw ur comment b4!! n welcum 2 VSHINE!! Bint Waseem
Oct 22nd 2011
 
 
Bint waseem Hi..wafa my name is zuha waseem..i am 13 years old,studin in grade 7.....sorry 4 late reply...cuz i didnt saw ur comment b4!! Bint Waseem
Oct 22nd 2011
 
 
Wafa Hello!!!!!!!! Momina what is your full name?What is your age?In which class do you study?I want to be you friend. Wafa
Oct 10th 2011
 
 
Wafa Thankyou MOMINA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wafa
Oct 10th 2011
 
 
Izza A.O.A! you commentors are 100% right that this story is incomplete but look that her age is only 10 & this kind of story is enough for her abilities. Izza
Oct 9th 2011
 
 
Momina Awesome story! wafa be proud of your self Momina
Oct 9th 2011
 
 
jiya Happy for what......and complete your story wafa it can bea mice ending... Jiya
Oct 7th 2011
 
 
syeda tahira Pls complete and it can have a very good moral i this story Syeda Tahira
Oct 7th 2011
 
 
Aimen Uncomplete story. Aimen
Oct 6th 2011
 
 
Fatema Wow Its intresting start and plz end it Fatema
Oct 4th 2011
 
 
Wafa Thankyou VSHINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wafa
Oct 3rd 2011
 
 
Wafa Hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aleena what is your age?In which class do you study? Wafa
Oct 3rd 2011
 
 
Wafa Hello!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bint wasim who are you? i right complete story.This is my first experience.I am new in vshine.Now,i improve my next stories.What is your age? In which class do you study? Wafa
Oct 3rd 2011
 
 
Fizzah Yeah u should complete it Fizzah
Oct 2nd 2011
 
 
Bint waseem I think its an incomplete story??? Bint Waseem
Oct 1st 2011
 
 
Bint waseem I think its an incomplete story??? Bint Waseem
Oct 1st 2011
 
 
alina The story is incomplete..???!!?? Alina
Oct 1st 2011
 
 
l Funny andd in line 5 it should be "her mother was nice''.... L
Oct 1st 2011
 
 
Wafa I am very happy. Wafa
Oct 1st 2011
 
 

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