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Muhammad Shafeh Ul Haq
Muhammad Shafeh Ul Haq
Pak Shama International Stream
My Father
Published On Sep 30th 2011
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He makes me happy when I cry
He gives me confidence when I shy
He tells me that I'm a good boy
When he is with me I feel joy
I wish he say me goodbye

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Comments 4
Daniyal Fatema is right Daniyal
Aug 25th 2012
 
 
Wania Good.... Wania
Oct 7th 2011
 
 
Urooj Wellllll its nyc bt last line is a bit disputing!!!!!!!anyway u tried its v.gud......try to write more!!!!! Urooj
Oct 6th 2011
 
 
Fatema Sweet and short Fatema
Oct 4th 2011
 
 

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