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Aamna Zulfiqar
Aamna Zulfiqar
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Greediness
Published On Sep 19th 2011
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Once upon a time there was a mouse. The mouse likes to live in the jungle. One day he was walking in the jungle and become so much hungry. Till half hour he could not find food and become hungry as well as angry. After a while he found one small whole. He entered in that whole and found that the whole take him to a house, no one was in the house. He entered in that house by whole and saw that the cheese was put on the table. He tries to go up at the table. Till five minutes he goes up at the table and ate all that cheese and become so much fat. Then he come down from the table and rest by lying on the floor. After five minutes he hears a noise like that the peoples were coming in their house and the mouse ran to the whole but the mouse could not get out of the whole because he was become so much fat. He tries so much but he could not get out of the whole. After five minutes the peoples see that mouse and kill him and it all was happen by his greediness of eating cheese.
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Comments 16
Tooba Mind blowing perfomance Tooba
May 10th 2014
 
 
Soha Superb.. Soha
Feb 12th 2013
 
 
Amna Good Efforts Aamna.......Want to be my friend????I am Amna too Amna
Dec 29th 2012
 
 
xerac YOU NEED TO LOOK OUT FOR UR DRAMATICAL MISTAKES OTHERWISE IT'S..........OK Xerac
Jan 2nd 2012
 
 
Aliza Not gud as i thought Aliza
Oct 21st 2011
 
 
aamna Thank you all of you Aamna
Sep 27th 2011
 
 
Momina Great story but before publishing it you should have reread it for mistakes. Momina
Sep 24th 2011
 
 
Wafa Superb Wafa
Sep 24th 2011
 
 
Manal Great story...KEEP UP THE GUD WORK.. Manal
Sep 22nd 2011
 
 
Saba Very nyccccccccccccc story Saba
Sep 22nd 2011
 
 
aamna Yes you are all are right that there are little mistakes in it. Aamna
Sep 21st 2011
 
 
Aleena Aamna your story is good but there are little mistakes in it. Its hole not whole and its people not peoples....otherwise it is good. Aleena
Sep 21st 2011
 
 
Bareera Ok nice Bareera
Sep 21st 2011
 
 
Bint waseem Very nyc story!! Bint Waseem
Sep 20th 2011
 
 
Aisha Nice story but it should be hole instead of whole..... Aisha
Sep 19th 2011
 
 
Laiba Nice story as well as topic. GUD!!!!!!!! Laiba
Sep 19th 2011
 
 

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