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Ali Saif
Ali Saif
The City School
Lost In A Supermarket
Published On May 8th 2010
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It was a pleasant evening and we had nothing to do so my mother decided to go to the supermarket. I went with her too because I wanted to buy my favourite cereal choco chex. It was a long way to the supermarket. We reached there half an hour later. We went inside and my mother told me to pick up a trolley.

I picked up the cereal which I wanted and put it in the trolley. My mother was busy buying hair gel for my big brother Aakash. We finished shopping and my mother was paying the bill.

I saw chocolates and wanted to eat one. I ran towards them, picked up a bar and started to eat it. It had caramel and melted chocolate inside it. By the time I finished my chocolate my mother wasn't there. I looked for her everywhere but I couldn't find her.

I started crying. Within a minute I was surrounded by a crowd of people. One man asked, "what happened little boy?"I told him that I couldn't find my mother anywhere.

I saw my mother running towards me. She said, "where have you been?!"I said, "well.......I saw these chocolates and I ran towards them to eat a bar. My mother said, "you naughty boy! I was so worried."
"I won't do this again and mother would you buy me a box of chocolates."I said with a smile.

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Comments 9
Tooba Fantastic Tooba
Apr 23rd 2014
Tooba Fantastic Tooba
Apr 23rd 2014
ZARA Nice Zara
Apr 23rd 2014
ZARA I liked your story please comment on Sara cooking class please all of u!!!!!!!!!! Zara
Nov 7th 2013
Aamna I like your story Aamna
Dec 26th 2010
Aleena Gooooooooood! Aleena
Nov 21st 2010
 Mohammad Saad ifrahim

wow!!!! amazing story in easy language GOOD and plz comment my poem "my cat" and my drawings

Mohammad Saad Ifrahim
Jul 11th 2010

very nice , i like it

May 12th 2010

Brilliant stuff!

May 12th 2010

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