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Mohammmad  Soban
Mohammmad Soban
Faisalabad Grammar School
A Ghost Adventure
Published On Aug 30th 2011
Total Comments : 18
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"Mom, I am sure that someone was there" said Little Hamid. Hamid had heard some voices in that "Haunted House".... That house was called "Haunted" because it was locked for more than "50 years". "Tomorrow I’ll surely go and visit that house." decided Hamid. Tomorrow, Hamid went to visit that house. When he came closer, he noticed that the lock of the door was broken. He became scare. But he still wanted to see that if someone is there or not. He entered in. He asked" Is someone there?" "Yes!!!" came a voice. Hamid shouted with fear "What!!!!!" He ran towards the door but suddenly the lights of the house switched on. "Happy birthday hamid" It was his Family doing all this happenings to create a ghost birthday party. "Ohhh.... I forgot, its...It’s My Birthday...Oh what a surprise..." said shocked Hamid. What do you think was that a cool birthday...oh sorry.... a ghost party..!
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Comments 18
Tooba Nice Tooba
May 22nd 2014
Soha Well written and nice effort......)) Keep it up! Soha
Jan 30th 2013
Anas Bakhita he hinted in the start that their parents knew that thier son was scared by that house.. you know.. when he was talking to his mother.. so his mom knew.. although this story could have a better explaination but I loved your idea muhammad nice one =) Anas
Aug 30th 2012
Bakhita Haha wasn't that funny??? Yess! it was! but how on earth did the family entered the house?? and how did they come to know that Hamid would be going there while Hamid just decided it within himself! Bakhita
Oct 19th 2011
hammad You written it good "nice job" Hammad
Oct 13th 2011
Zainab nyc Zainab
Sep 30th 2011
Aimen It is nice but the ending is sooo boring Aimen
Sep 30th 2011
Izza A.O.A! Mohammad,you asked me about my 10th class result.So I would like to tell you in this matter that I've recently given 9th board exams in march-april 2011 & my 9th class result has came on 22nd august & I've secured 413/480 marks (86%) & topped in whole school (boys & girls block).Now, I will give 10th class exams in starting of march than my Matric will INSHALLAH-TALLAH complete in august (when my result will come).Hope so you are explained.Jazakallah Kharen. Izza
Sep 27th 2011
Momina Alright story Momina
Sep 24th 2011
Fizzah It is nice story but y r u commenting your self? Fizzah
Sep 13th 2011
Bint waseem Nyc!!! Bint Waseem
Sep 12th 2011
Sep 10th 2011
Maham Nice Maham
Sep 8th 2011
Alyina I agree with khadija Alyina
Sep 1st 2011
Aug 30th 2011
Mohammmad Good Mohammmad
Aug 30th 2011
Mohammmad Well Written by me Mohammmad
Aug 30th 2011
Mohammmad Good Written Mohammmad
Aug 30th 2011

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