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Sana Imran
Sana Imran
The Butterfly
Published On Aug 24th 2011
Total Comments : 24
Total Views :  793
10 People Like this!


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It is a story about a small butterfly that lost her parents when she was young and she lived alone. Her name was Rimsha. When she grew up she made friends. There were only four friends. Maria, Ileen, Mariyam and Maira. So one day Rimsha was going out with her friends too so her feather was got stuck on a tree. All her friends left her and only Maria was there to help her so she thanked her and Maria picked her and left her to rest in her home so day by day she was getting well as Maria always looked after her so one day Maria's food was finished so she told Rimsha and Rimsha told that she can share her food and from that day Maria and Rimsha was best friends!!!
Moral-A friend in need is a friend in deed!!!
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Comments 24
Momina Abdur-Rehman, your're a sore, jealous, loser, sorry to say! ABDUR-REHMAN IS JEALOUS! ON A COOOOOOOL STORY! p.s Anyone, adult, teenager OR child can enjoy this story! g' luck! Momina
Feb 14th 2012
sana Is it really nice???? Sana
Oct 13th 2011
Momina Great! Momina
Oct 9th 2011
Aimen Very gud story keep it up Aimen
Oct 2nd 2011
Zainab Nice story Zainab
Sep 19th 2011
Maria Carry on Maria
Sep 16th 2011
alina Not much is just fine 4 adult..but nyc for young ones.. Alina
Sep 14th 2011
Fizzah Good keep it up Fizzah
Sep 13th 2011
Mohammmad Good Story!!! Mohammmad
Sep 4th 2011
syed saad Wow beautiful story Syed Saad
Sep 2nd 2011
Izza Assalam-o-Alaikum! Dear V SHINE & my all V SHINE cute friends, Happy Chaand Raat! May ALLAH(SWT) bless all of us with HIS blessings! Jazakallah Kharen. Izza
Aug 29th 2011
Izza Assalam-o-Alaikum! Dear V SHINE & my all V SHINE cute friends, Happy Chaand Raat! Izza
Aug 29th 2011
Fatima Really gud Fatima
Aug 29th 2011
Mahnoor Gud one Mahnoor
Aug 29th 2011
sana Thank you!!!!! Sana
Aug 28th 2011
Aliza Nice for kids nd i thnk its not lame as said by abdur-rehman, its nice Aliza
Aug 26th 2011
aamna Your story is nice but if you like my story please comment me or click on nice button. Aamna
Aug 26th 2011
Saniya So typical. Saniya
Aug 25th 2011
sana Thank you!!!! Sana
Aug 25th 2011
Wafa After every sentence you have added 'so' instead you should have put a 'full stop' but no problem "try try till you sucseed" your story is good Wafa
Aug 25th 2011
hurriya Nicee Hurriya
Aug 25th 2011
Wania Its really good.... Wania
Aug 24th 2011
Abdur-Rahman Lame for teenagers or adults but good for kids Abdur-rahman
Aug 24th 2011
Aisha Nice story for young kids... Aisha
Aug 24th 2011

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