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Maham Shahzad
Maham Shahzad
Bright Future Pakistani International School
My Sister
Published On Aug 19th 2011
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My sister cares for me
And follows me like a bee
As she is bigger than me
She loves me like her pet
She loves me too much I bet
She sometimes shows flattery
But for me she's like a lottery
 
My sister cares for me
And follows me like a bee
As she is bigger than me
She tries to make me pure
Meanwhile her feet become soar
Whenever there's a fight
And then I cried
She held me tight
She always took my side
 
My sister cares for me
And follows me like a bee
As she is bigger than me
I love her for her good nature
And so in future
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Comments 10
Raniah Nice . . poem . . Raniah
Jul 17th 2012
 
 
aamna Nice poem Aamna
Sep 15th 2011
 
 
Bint waseem Gud!!!!!! Bint Waseem
Sep 10th 2011
 
 
Urooj Ooops sooooooo sorry i havent read ur name Urooj
Aug 25th 2011
 
 
eisha Nice but you see you changed into past tense in some sentences like as if your sis used to do this and doesn't do it now! Eisha
Aug 20th 2011
 
 
Aisha Just like the poem English this one's written by me and Maham both. We both have written bundles of stories and poems together in school. And they all r well-appreciated by our teachers.... Aisha
Aug 20th 2011
 
 
Maham I am not a boy, im a girl. its the pic of my cousin and brother. i am the biggest in my family. Maham
Aug 19th 2011
 
 
Urooj V.nyc I wish I had a bro like you who wrote a poem on me AHHHHHH........... Urooj
Aug 19th 2011
 
 
Directioner Forever I like it but I wish I had a big sister........... Directioner Forever
Aug 19th 2011
 
 
Aisha Isn't this poem written by someone else too? Am i right Aisha
Aug 19th 2011
 
 

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