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Pivak -e-safa
Pivak -e-safa
Chiniot Islamia School
My Parents
Published On Aug 15th 2011
Total Comments : 39
Total Views :  695
19 People Like this!


Rank 7 Out of 10
My parents are like
The shade of a tree
Their life is like
A model for me
Whenever I need help
I don’t have to look for
They are always with me
In peace and war
My parents are a great
Blessing of god
Obeying them is always
My occupation
I love my parents
More than anything
And without them
I am nothing...
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Comments 39
noor-e- Is Pivak -e-safa your real name Noor-e-
May 11th 2013
Bareera Guddeeeeee Bareera
Mar 9th 2012
Pivak Thank u papa :p Pivak
Sep 19th 2011
Arshad Nice Thoughts Nice Poem May Allah Bless You Arshad
Sep 18th 2011
Eishaal Nyc Eishaal
Sep 18th 2011
aamna Nice poem Aamna
Sep 15th 2011
Bint waseem Nyce!!!! Bint Waseem
Sep 10th 2011
Pivak Sure :) Pivak
Aug 31st 2011
Naima Can I say u aapi or baji? Naima
Aug 29th 2011
Pivak Anyway safa thanks fr liking Pivak
Aug 26th 2011
Pivak Hehehe my sister was also saying that i dont think that this is her/his picture... now i m nt sure that ur a grl Pivak
Aug 26th 2011
Bakhita Yeh I am hafiza but the photo is not mine! :P hehe Bakhita
Aug 25th 2011
safa I like your poem very much amira asked me to like it Safa
Aug 25th 2011
Aug 25th 2011
Disenchanted. I WILL ASK MY FRIENDS TO LIKE YOUR POEM Disenchanted.
Aug 25th 2011
Pivak Ok amira... :) Pivak
Aug 24th 2011
Disenchanted. Thank u pivak comment on my poem My best friend please Disenchanted.
Aug 24th 2011
Pivak Amira thank u very much for liking... :) ur pic is very nice Pivak
Aug 23rd 2011
Pivak Thanks aleena n friend :) Pivak
Aug 23rd 2011
Disenchanted. Pivak it is a very lovely poem accept my request please Disenchanted.
Aug 23rd 2011
friend Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! really good Friend
Aug 23rd 2011
Pivak Thanks khansa dear... n INSHA ALLAH Pivak
Aug 22nd 2011
Aleena Good... Aleena
Aug 22nd 2011
khansa Pivak its realy nice... i think u will be the winner... INSHAALLAH... :) Khansa
Aug 22nd 2011
Pivak Thanks wania :) Pivak
Aug 21st 2011
Pivak No "talha" is nt my account... r u realy a hafiza??? Pivak
Aug 21st 2011
Wania Great i really love it......... Wania
Aug 21st 2011
Bakhita And Pivak! that was you with the name of Talha was not that? Bakhita
Aug 21st 2011
Bakhita And Pivak! that was you with the name of Talha on SS! was not that? Bakhita
Aug 21st 2011
areeba I like this alot !!!! Areeba
Aug 20th 2011
Pivak Bakhita dear thanks fr accepting my request... ur pic is awesome yaar... now i can belive that ur a girl :p :) :D Pivak
Aug 19th 2011
Bakhita Cant believe its u! u sent me request! i really cant believe! thnx for all that but u just talk to me! Bakhita
Aug 19th 2011
Directioner Forever Hi... I like ur poem.... I mean its really difficult 2 wr8 something about da best people in the world... Keep writing like this.... Directioner Forever
Aug 17th 2011
Pivak Well iman dear thank u tooo... n i will comment it :) Pivak
Aug 17th 2011
Aisha A beautiful poem, I liked it a lot. Aisha
Aug 17th 2011
iman Ur welcum!!!!! Iman
Aug 17th 2011
Pivak Thanx... Pivak
Aug 17th 2011
iman Yup...urooj is 100 percent right.....its really nyc!!!.....I have written a poem "Friends" plz comment it. Iman
Aug 17th 2011
Urooj Hmmmmn really nyc!!!! Urooj
Aug 16th 2011

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