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Zainab  Khan
Zainab Khan
Beaconhouse School System
The Bay
Published On Aug 5th 2011
Total Comments : 12
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I saw some big waves in the bay,
And I started to say,
Someone who doesn't know how to swim will surely drown,
Suddenly I saw a woman wearing a black gown,
I asked her to help me with something,
But she said she was in a hurry to leave town,
I saw she was holding some bags,
And they all had tags,
Tied neatly all around,
And I found,
Those behind her were some boys,
Each holding some toys,
She went away,
Not listening to what I wanted to say,
Left me all alone by myself,
Near the bay. 

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Comments 12
Zainab Thank u sooo much Izza u r so sweet! Zainab
Dec 2nd 2011
Izza Mustajab..yo keep it up...!!!! u'll b famous 1 day...great writings 7 dis 1 iz da mst nice 1... Izza
Dec 2nd 2011
aamna Nice Poem Aamna
Sep 17th 2011
Aug 23rd 2011
l I think that the story is incomplete.coz u should tell what happen with the woman and who was the children. L
Aug 21st 2011
Zainab Thnxxxx for commenting guys!!!!!!! Zainab
Aug 10th 2011
Laiba Tankx 4 being frnd Laiba
Aug 9th 2011
Laiba Nice. PLZ be frnd. Laiba
Aug 9th 2011
eisha I'm sorry to say this but this poem doesn't make any SENSE!!! i guess its kind of a mystery??? ............ Eisha
Aug 8th 2011
Urooj Hhmnnnnnnnnn really gud!!!!! Urooj
Aug 8th 2011
Zainab Plzzzzzzz read and comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Zainab
Aug 6th 2011
Zainab Plz read and comment!!!!!!!! Zainab
Aug 6th 2011

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