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Rija Fatima
Rija Fatima
Lahore Grammar School
Keeping Promise
Published On Jul 30th 2011
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Asher was tired when he came back from the shooting of the new film, Dice. He made himself a glass of lemonade. He took a deep breath and reminded himself that his new horror film was extremely scary, and was not for children, but he had promised some children that he would take them to the premier. He had to think something really fast, how about an excuse. Or he could just let go the promise. He thought of going to his mother and gets her suggestion. He went for his garage locked the main door, sat in his car and left.
"Mother", he said when he entered the house, his sister came to the door and told that mother was sleeping. Asher thought of talking to his sister, he told her the scenario."My dear brother, I am afraid that I can't help you. You must  keep your promise and show them a movie and you can also take them shopping. They would love to buy books, and please tell them why you are not taking them to the premier. Oh and I will surely join you. Go now it's almost eight you must go I will come to Cine Star they are showing Ice Age 2 today. Go now. Chop chop''. She went in to change and Asher left to pick the children. Everyone was happy and the promise wasn't broken.

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Comments 7
abir Mashallah a nice story Abir
Jan 2nd 2012
areeba Nice Areeba
Jan 2nd 2012
Momina Allah has gifted you with a wonderful brain for thinking up such a beautiful story. Momina
Oct 12th 2011
Momina Good story with a good moral: keep your promise Momina
Aug 8th 2011
Zainab Goooooood job!!!!! Zainab
Aug 8th 2011
Bint waseem Nice! Bint Waseem
Jul 31st 2011
Fizzah Wonder ful story Fizzah
Jul 30th 2011

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