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Momina Bhatty
Momina Bhatty
Hurlingham And Chelsea Secondary School
Kindness Is Repaid
Published On Jul 23rd 2011
Total Comments : 54
Total Views :  1703
25 People Like this!


Rank 5 Out of 10
Once upon a time there was a little bunny rabbit. His mother and father had to go out one day. His father told him, "Don't open the door to anybody. I have bought you some things to eat if you feel hungry." And then he said goodbye to the bunny rabbit and went off. The bunny rabbit ate all the snacks while watching TV Suddenly a knock came from the locked door. "Who is it?” asked the bunny rabbit.  "I'm here to give you carrots." The bunny rabbit opened the door, only to find a snake. The bunny rabbit got very scared and started screaming for help. All the animals heard his screams and came rushing to help the bunny rabbit who had always been kind to them. The snake, scared at seeing so many animals quickly slithered away. This goes to show kindness is always repaid.
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Comments 54
Zainab Gud Zainab
Feb 1st 2018
manail Nyccc! Manail
Aug 29th 2016
Amna Gud 1.. Amna
Dec 22nd 2014
Tooba Fantastic story Tooba
May 3rd 2014
Gul Noor Lov it!!!! Gul Noor
Aug 23rd 2013
Laibah Its a good story, but the rabbit was actually very greedy and he wanted to eat the carrots Laibah
Apr 27th 2013
Soha Momina, I visited yor blog! It was splendrific! Soha
Apr 26th 2013
Soha Nice! Soha
Mar 31st 2013
aasiya Nysh! Aasiya
Mar 22nd 2013
Momina Thankx guyz in future omar ill try to make em lengthier :) Momina
Mar 17th 2013
Omer A good lesson! But should be a bit lengthy Omer
Jan 27th 2013
Khadijah Good one Khadijah
Jan 4th 2013
Amna Nice... Amna
Dec 18th 2012
Momina Thankx every1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Momina
Dec 14th 2012
sheraz Great attempt... Sheraz
Nov 25th 2012
(^_^) Nd my name is Eman too (^_^)
Nov 9th 2012
Emaan Wow, love the story's title, TOTALLY suitable. So cute!\ Oh and your sister's name is Emaan too? Sweet!!!! Emaan
Oct 30th 2012
Ayan Well the cannons in my story are just my imaginary arsenal and is nothing compared to your story Ayan
Apr 19th 2012
areeba V.good!! * * Areeba
Jan 3rd 2012
Laiba Good result!!! Laiba
Nov 19th 2011
Eman Im mominas sister. Eman
Oct 17th 2011
Directioner Forever Awesome Directioner Forever
Oct 15th 2011
Eman I m new to vshine. I loved your story.It was nice.I likeed it. Eman
Oct 15th 2011
Momina Mohummad im not allowed to accept friend requests. my dad banned it. very sorry! Momina
Oct 5th 2011
Mohammmad ACCEPT MY REQUEST Mohammmad
Oct 2nd 2011
Mohammmad Good Written!!! Mohammmad
Sep 26th 2011
lily Watever Lily
Sep 25th 2011
usaidkhan Nice story but why were u in such a hurry Usaidkhan
Sep 12th 2011
Bint waseem Gud!!!!!! Bint Waseem
Sep 6th 2011
Disenchanted. "Do not fight" should be the rule of v shine. but momina i like your story it is very good Disenchanted.
Aug 24th 2011
Maham Why u r not allowed to accept frendz request? iam not a wrong girl. i wanna be ur frend, if u accept. not forcing!! Maham
Aug 18th 2011
Bareera Sweeeet Bareera
Aug 18th 2011
Urooj Gud try to do more............... Urooj
Aug 17th 2011
Zainab Nyc!!!!!!!!!!! Zainab
Aug 16th 2011
Momina Its a start and you should support it i dont know about your video but by your attidude it must have been boring. and wafa im in class 4 Momina
Aug 16th 2011
Wafa @yes momina i can be your friend of coarse .in which class you study @hurriya can you please tell me the topic of warda's story then maybe i can tell you the answer of your question. Wafa
Aug 12th 2011
hurriya wafa then why you said boring to wardah's story her story is far better than this and i agree with syeda Hurriya
Aug 10th 2011
syeda tahira I am just saying that cause i have been the winner of the april month Syeda Tahira
Aug 9th 2011
syeda tahira So if you are not the winner of the month then stop postingLAME COMMENTS you are not the best author of the world that you will keep saying everyone that there stories are lame:p Syeda Tahira
Aug 9th 2011
Momina Im sorry i am not allowed to make friends on vshine. my father has banned it. Momina
Aug 9th 2011
Zainab Nycccc Zainab
Aug 9th 2011
Momina Im not in the winner of the month column because this is my first story Momina
Aug 9th 2011
syeda tahira If u think my stories are lame then why dont you be the winner of the month in stories collumn Syeda Tahira
Aug 8th 2011
Momina Will you be my friend wafa? your kindness has touched me! Momina
Aug 8th 2011
Momina Thank you! :) My cousin helped me with it! Momina
Aug 8th 2011
Momina Thank you! :) Momina
Aug 8th 2011
Wafa Huriya you should at least say it's ok but it's not lame and boring Wafa
Aug 4th 2011
hurriya Old and lame and boring story!! Hurriya
Aug 1st 2011
Wafa Its a old story but its good Wafa
Jul 27th 2011
Saba Good Saba
Jul 26th 2011
Aliza Nice try. Aliza
Jul 26th 2011
Fizzah Nice story Fizzah
Jul 24th 2011
javaria Old story Javaria
Jul 24th 2011
wardah Good story Wardah
Jul 24th 2011

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