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Fatima Nadeem
Fatima Nadeem
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The Disobedient Girl
Published On Jul 21st 2011
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Once upon a time there was a girl named Lily. She lived in a village near a big, scary forest. She was a very naughty girl. She never listened to anyone. She thought that she was the only one in the world. She never obeyed her elders-even her parents!
One day her mother gave her some money to buy bread and milk. Lily, there upon, shouted, "I'll not go. You always treat me like a servant!"
Next morning she went outside to play with her friends. It was getting darker. They were playing hide and seek. Lily went into the big, scary forest and hid there.
"Let's see if anyone can find me," shouted Lily. She went even deeper into the forest. She did not recognize where she was going.
Suddenly it started raining. It rained cats and dogs. But still her mind was not working. "My goodness! Where in the world am I?" cried Lily. She was feeling cold. She sat under a tree to prevent herself from the unpleasant weather. Soon the rain stopped. She was glad that the weather is pleasant again. But she didn't know what was going to happen to her.
As she was finding her way out of the scary forest, she saw a really beautiful woman. She kept staring her. Suddenly, the beautiful women turned into an ugly witch. Lily was terrified. She started running away from her. But what? She couldn't! It seemed kind of impossible. There were many routes. She tried different routes but all the routes took her back to the witch.
"Ha, ha, ha! You can't escape, silly little girl!" said the witch in a cruel voice. At last the witch caught Lily's arm. "Please don't kill me! Please... I'm just a little girl," cried Lily, sobbing. The witch put her into a big cage. She said, "This is your lesson. You disobey your parents. You never listen to anyone. You are cruel to other people. So, it won't matter if I don't listen to you, if I am cruel!"
"Okay, I give up. I'll never do it again. I'm sorry," said Lily. "No! There's no sorry anymore. I am the witch who takes away naughty and disobedient children with me and change them into an ugly witch forever..." said the witch. Lily began to cry. She cried really loudly. This time she was really disappointed by herself. "I'm very sorry; I'll never do it again. I'll try my best. I'll obey my parents and be nice and kind to everyone, I promise."
But the witch didn't hear even a single word. "Now, I'll make you an ugly witch!" The witch said some magic spells on Lily. As she was doing this, Lily opened her eyes. She was on her bed. What is this? She was dreaming. She ran to her mother and hugged her. "Mother, I'm really sorry. I'll never disobey you. Please forgive me," said Lily in a sweet voice. "I forgive you," said her mother. She kissed her little daughter and went to her room.
Lily learned her lesson. Now she was kind to everyone. She never disobeyed her parents anymore. "One day I'll be a doctor and help all the poor people," said Lily.
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Comments 16
Rida Nice Rida
Oct 5th 2013
FIZZA Nice!!!! Fizza
Jul 25th 2013
usaidkhan COOL Usaidkhan
Sep 11th 2011
Bint waseem Gud! Bint Waseem
Sep 6th 2011
Bareera Sweet...... Bareera
Aug 17th 2011
Fatima Once again thnx everyone! Fatima
Aug 10th 2011
Momina Cool man Momina
Aug 8th 2011
Saniya Nice story, Fatima. Saniya
Aug 3rd 2011
Saba U r welcum fatima :) dear Saba
Jul 31st 2011
Aliza Wow nice Aliza
Jul 29th 2011
Wafa Good story Wafa
Jul 27th 2011
Fatima Well, thanks everyone! Fatima
Jul 27th 2011
Saba Wonderful,,,, Saba
Jul 26th 2011
Farha Good yar Farha
Jul 22nd 2011
Fatima Thanks Aisha Fatima
Jul 21st 2011
Aisha Very nice and moralistic story. Keep it up Fatima Aisha
Jul 21st 2011

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