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Zindgi  Tariq
Zindgi Tariq
Divisional Model College
An Innocent Letter To God
Published On Oct 29th 2017
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August 2017
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“An Innocent Letter to God”
(In the content below, an unborn baby writes to God about how much he is terrified of this world and prays to God for peace. This whole content is piece of fiction and imagination)
Dear God,
Eight months have gone since I left the heavens. Another month to go and according to mom, I’ll be in her arms. I miss you and the angels. I was pretty excited for stepping into a whole new world but, now that feeling has gone.
Boom!
Whenever mom turns the television on, I hear terrible sounds. I come to know about how humans are being killed through bomb blasts, drone attacks and gunshots. Murders, crimes and lies! Humans killing humans! I’ve often heard people saying, ‘they went to school and never came back’. This sounds so terrible. How could somebody kill innocent children?
Oh God!
I’m so scared. I know I have to step into this world whether happily or sadly but, I know prayer can even change a person’s fate. So, I pray for peace from the core of my heart. I pray that humans start respecting humanity and begin to love each other. I pray that they start to follow the right path and stop committing sinful acts.
Waiting for peace,
Innocent unborn baby
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Comments 15
Jungkook's Nice, tbh I'm not interested in anything besides K-Pop but this is awesone, I'll try to visit this site often°~!! Jungkook's
Mar 31st 2018
 
 
yashfeen Amazing Yashfeen
Mar 24th 2018
 
 
Afrah Its OSM Afrah
Mar 18th 2018
 
 
Fatima Its so wonderful. Fatima
Mar 13th 2018
 
 
shaheer It's Imaginary... That's what we call fiction #HAFSA Shaheer
Mar 10th 2018
 
 
shaheer It is the best one of the five in the list...... 6 stars out of five nice concept well used GREAT Shaheer
Mar 10th 2018
 
 
Hamza Ali Fab , well written , the idea is awesome to show the need of peace in the WORLD . Hamza Ali
Feb 5th 2018
 
 
hafsa Oh! now I under stand! Hafsa
Jan 15th 2018
 
 
Zindgi Haha. Thanks, Sakifay. Sabeen, Aiza and Zainab - Thank you all And yes! Sabeen is right, Hafsa. It's just a piece of fiction and its mere purpose is to show the importance and dire need of peace. Zindgi
Dec 24th 2017
 
 
Sakifay Mary Your pic is the same innocent😄😄😄😄 Sakifay Mary
Dec 11th 2017
 
 
Zainab Omg...fantastic Zainab
Dec 6th 2017
 
 
Sabeen Its just fiction Hafsa Sabeen
Dec 5th 2017
 
 
hafsa What_ _ _ how can an unborn baby say that_ _ _? Hafsa
Dec 3rd 2017
 
 
Aiza Amazing!! I wish everyone would think like that😊😊 Aiza
Nov 18th 2017
 
 
Sabeen Masha Allah sooo nice Sabeen
Nov 17th 2017
 
 

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