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    Jawwad Mateen
    Jawwad Mateen
    The Educators
    My Father
    Published On Jul 13th 2011
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    My father is very good
    He loves from my childhood
    He fulfil my wishes
    And bought every thing
    That I demand him
    Lovely and expensive clothes
    Interesting story books
    Toys and my favourite food
    Sometimes he is angry
    But every time in cool MOOD.
     
     
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    Comments 5
    Sidra Yes shahama is right there are some mistakes but over all the poem is good! Sidra
    Feb 21st 2012
     
     
    aamna Nice poem Aamna
    Sep 17th 2011
     
     
    Wania Nice!! Wania
    Aug 21st 2011
     
     
    Urooj Nyc!!!!! Urooj
    Jul 17th 2011
     
     
    Shahamah The poem is very nice..keep writing on. But there are some grammatical mistakes so try to overcome these mistakes Shahamah
    Jul 16th 2011
     
     

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