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Jawwad Mateen
The Educators
My Father
Published On Jul 13th 2011
Total Comments : 5
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My father is very good
He loves from my childhood
He fulfil my wishes
And bought every thing
That I demand him
Lovely and expensive clothes
Interesting story books
Toys and my favourite food
Sometimes he is angry
But every time in cool MOOD.
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Comments 5
Yes shahama is right there are some mistakes but over all the poem is good!
Sidra
Feb 21st 2012
Nice poem
Aamna
Sep 17th 2011
Nice!!
Wania
Aug 21st 2011
Nyc!!!!!
Urooj
Jul 17th 2011
The poem is very nice..keep writing on. But there are some grammatical mistakes so try to overcome these mistakes
Shahamah
Jul 16th 2011
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