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Jawwad Mateen
Jawwad Mateen
The Educators
My Father
Published On Jul 13th 2011
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My father is very good
He loves from my childhood
He fulfil my wishes
And bought every thing
That I demand him
Lovely and expensive clothes
Interesting story books
Toys and my favourite food
Sometimes he is angry
But every time in cool MOOD.
 
 
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Sidra Yes shahama is right there are some mistakes but over all the poem is good! Sidra
Feb 21st 2012
 
 
aamna Nice poem Aamna
Sep 17th 2011
 
 
Wania Nice!! Wania
Aug 21st 2011
 
 
Urooj Nyc!!!!! Urooj
Jul 17th 2011
 
 
Shahamah The poem is very nice..keep writing on. But there are some grammatical mistakes so try to overcome these mistakes Shahamah
Jul 16th 2011
 
 

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