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Berha Irfan
Berha Irfan
F.d.c Risalpur
Disturbances: Iv
Published On Aug 31st 2017
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I was so tired this morning and this suit is so heavy! I mean wearing a metal magnetic suit for a whole day ain't easy... Then, I wonder how Tony Stark got it so easy. I took off the magnets and really wanted to bath which meant I had to abort the mission. But I wasn't gonna give up that easy, it was now the 8th of August and surprisingly really hot in the small town of Westville. But I wasn't in Westville, I was in Art Taipei, one of the fanciest and high standards sort of city. Only the richest people can afford a place here. OMG! Sandy Beach! That has a magnetic entrance for security reasons, no disturbance (Please readers, do call it a disturbance, and not a ghost because it is not a ghost! It is something created by man since we do not know what they are, disturbances are the most appropriate name for them) could enter! Oh, how I love watching Ar Tepie Inside! Now I popped in the iron suit and became IronWoman! I am so respected even the disturbances got out of my way when I exited the cave... Hehehe. I paid 50 cents for the ticket into Sandy Beach. They had hung magnets literally everywhere! Now, this the place I can bath! I showered in the bathroom for 10 minutes got out and rested on the warm beach.
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Berha Oh i luv u all so much!!! ❤️❤️ Thanks!!! Berha
Sep 10th 2017
 
 
sajahir Please publish the next part Sajahir
Sep 6th 2017
 
 
sajahir Great story Sajahir
Sep 5th 2017
 
 
sajahir Great story Sajahir
Sep 5th 2017
 
 
Fatima I really like your work I appreciate it a lot really u write a lot of cool stories which I haven't even read but still I read all the comments like on your frozen part one the story ....and I think u have better glammer than me😂😂😋❤️ Fatima
Aug 31st 2017
 
 
Sabeen Awesome story Berha waiting for the next part Sabeen
Aug 31st 2017
 
 

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