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Fatima Tahir
Fatima Tahir
Jinnah Officers School
Greed Is Curse
Published On Jul 11th 2011
Total Comments : 28
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Once upon a time there was a man who was very poor and lives with his wife and a daughter. His wife sew clothes and spend their time once the man bought a puncture and some tyres then he opened his shop but as it was a village so he didn’t get so many customers. Then he got an idea of getting some money every night. If he spread nails on the road then he’ll get more and more money. Soon he would become rich and make his shop big. One day when he came home he heard voices of shouting and crying. He got in and saw his wife weeping holding his daughter. He asked what happened then she told them she have pain in her stomach. he said let us take her city he got out and take out car but he forgot that he had threw nails on road so his car tyre burst and he didn’t have any extra tyre in his garage. Then his wife told him that it’s because of him what he tried to get money in bad way. Then he prayed and prayed and said sorry to ALLAH for his deeds then suddenly a car came and gave them his extra tyre. He got to hospital and his daughter was the lesson we learned is that we should not do anything wrong to make money............................
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Comments 28
Aug 10th 2013
Laibah Very gud story Laibah
Jul 5th 2013
Areeba Goooood story. please accept my friend requesttttt!!!!!! Areeba
Jun 7th 2013
Nimra Hey plz accept my friend request!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzz Nimra
Jan 11th 2013
aamna Your story is so much nice and superb but what about my poem on sky. If you think it is nice them comment to me. Dear fatima Aamna
Aug 23rd 2011
Laiba Gud 1. plz accept my friend resquest Laiba
Aug 18th 2011
l Nice one. L
Aug 18th 2011
Bareera Nice story. i want to be your friend,I love your name too much Bareera
Aug 16th 2011
alina I do not know Alina
Aug 16th 2011
fatima Alina how can we remove someone from friends.......................... Fatima
Aug 16th 2011
alina So that means you have excused me???? Alina
Aug 15th 2011
fatima Same here................................... Fatima
Aug 14th 2011
alina Fatima I am sorry but I don't not mean to be jealous anyway ur story is nyc and I am sorry what ever I have said you in past...... Alina
Aug 14th 2011
alina First plz see that you have written wrong spellings........ Alina
Aug 14th 2011
fatima Mind you language jellous................. Fatima
Aug 13th 2011
alina Thank god that the girl without brain has written such a nyc story...... Alina
Aug 13th 2011
fatima Thanks.......................... Fatima
Aug 6th 2011
Saniya Nice Story. By the way, I like ur profile pic. Saniya
Aug 3rd 2011
Bint waseem TREMENDOUS!!!!!!!!!!! Bint Waseem
Aug 1st 2011
zainab I like this one Zainab
Jul 29th 2011
eisha Hi! accept my friend request Eisha
Jul 22nd 2011
Wafa Taking money in a bad way is like taking charity. good job and good topic keep it up! Wafa
Jul 17th 2011
Mairah It's good and moralistic! Mairah
Jul 15th 2011
Itachi Goood story!! keep it up!! Itachi
Jul 13th 2011
fatima Thanks to all.............. Fatima
Jul 12th 2011
Namra Its moralistic story.Good effort.keep it up! Namra
Jul 12th 2011
Aisha An excellent story keep it up. Aisha
Jul 12th 2011
armeen Nyc story and a very influenced moral! Armeen
Jul 12th 2011

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